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On our feet

On Our Feet

Lost in the feel of  feet sinking into the sands of the beach
A huge wave crashes in to warn that I was within danger’s reach
Like a minor mishap rocking  feet planted in easy life.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair,   30-jan-12
For Nette’s ‘On your feet’ contest.

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  1. Date: 6/3/2012 11:27:00 PM
    You are doing well in these contests lately, Jaggy...This one was super duper competitive and u did very well...I bombed in this one --I think my count was off...Nice epressions of the ocean, dear! G.

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 8:26:00 AM
    congrats on your win in my contest, jag!.. enjoyed the piece of action here:) huggs!

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 3:15:00 AM
    Congrats SJ on your win in the contest.Good Sijo here.

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 2:44:00 AM
    Congratulations JAG x

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 3:53:00 PM
    Glad to see this on the winners' list. JAG. It was one of the best messages given in this contest!

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 11:11:00 AM
    Very nice Jag. Congratulations on your win

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 9:33:00 AM
    congrats Jag on a superb win for these exciting words.. u know I luv the beach..waves and sand and your perspective in the last line is awesome ..way to go my friend..

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 5:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Nette's "On Your Feet" contest Jag. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 6:38:00 AM
    jag!!.. thanks for entering... please check the defintion of sijo in my contest page...GO!!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 1:06:00 AM
    your last line is captivating, a wonderful piece. good luck on the contest, Jag

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 9:16:00 PM
    I like the picture this created and the message you sent, Jag.

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 5:17:00 AM
    I like it alot,good luck in the contest !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise