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On Demand

I want you On demand I can't stand... Delay No way Here...now I want to play Make me sway all night all day You're on demand Understand? Command upon Command Hand clasped on hand Band tightens band On demand Make me lie Make me stand As flesh you brand With fiery strand SO unplanned On demand!!!! Yes...I want you On DEMAND Roya

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/21/2014 10:09:00 AM

So passionate... So powerful. LOVE.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/20/2014 5:46:00 AM

When the heart is filled with love, one is always ON DEMAND, dear Eileen! When the heart is empty no value is there if someone is ON DEMAND or not! Powerful poem!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/20/2014 7:14:00 AM

Wisdom speaks. Thank you, my dear poet. You are always there to offer me guidance and understanding. Yes...Love...TRUE LOVE...needs to be there at all times, for only TRUE love will respond to such a call as this. Hugs

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/20/2014 2:20:00 AM

Your crave, unwilling to be staved by song or promise played, only penetration into a body sweltering for heavenly melting will make a heart saved in euphoric concentration...impromptu love is good! "Hand clasped on hand, band tightens band..." Hot intensity, tight flow Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/20/2014 5:13:00 AM

Thank you, Justin. You understand. I appreciate your insights into my work. Impromptu love....on demand....is very good, indeed. People would be surprised to know that the Bible does address this issue...Yes, of course, it is referring to the marriage setting. The author says that we are not to deprive one another of our conjugal rights, for our bodies are not our own. That is what most people fail to see...the sensual writes in the Bible...Song of Solomon...for instance. Oh well, let the world think what it will. I don't care anymore...Thank you for being there for me and for supporting me.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2014 6:47:00 PM

ooh, you are a dominatrix!! Fun and sexy. I think you made a typo when you said "make my lie" Do you mean "me?" Let me see another one now.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/20/2014 5:09:00 AM

Thanks, my dear. There are varying degrees of that in all of us, Andrea. Fun and sexy...that makes me feel good. Thank you for your visit and for the correction. I appreciate it.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/19/2014 3:54:00 PM

Do not delete this 'demanding' write, Eileen. I enjoyed it, and it appears that others do as well. It is no secret that you get what you go after...and why not, since you have the power! // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/20/2014 5:07:00 AM

Thanks, Paul....I appreciate your vote of support. We have different sides to our characters...loving and gentle, domineering and aggressive. Demanding what we want...Begging for what we want...It's all part of life's game. Those who claim not to be this way...Well, I have words to describe them, but I will not. Thank you...for your support. It comes at a good time for I am discouraged. Appassionata...that is my life, my dear. I fight my battles daily...with smiles...with tears...and I try to survive. Hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/19/2014 3:31:00 PM

this is great, eileen! i bet this one just jumped out of you onto the page...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/20/2014 5:00:00 AM

I really don't know where it came from. It's not a new concept for me, Ilene. ;) I just wanted to write this one and let it fly...It is the rebel in me....pushing against the limits. Thanks for reading.

Sebastian Aaron Baez

Date: 10/19/2014 2:24:00 PM

Don't delete this, it was great, sounded very seductive to me. Nothing is sexier than a woman taking charge and getting what she wants. :)

Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 10/19/2014 2:35:00 PM

Replies like that only arouse my curiosity...... :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/19/2014 2:33:00 PM

Finally...approval! I'm going to get told off for this one, but...while I'm getting my taste of success, I'll let it be. Dearie...was going to use another word, but...HA! Glad you got the effect I was going for, Sebastian.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/19/2014 2:25:00 PM

hmmmmmmmm......hhhhhhhmmmmmmmm.....and THAT'S all I have to say to this one!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/19/2014 2:23:00 PM

Haha...You do speak your mind when you want something...we love for that because that who you are...hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/19/2014 2:34:00 PM

hmmmmmmmm......hhhhhhhmmmmmmmm.....and THAT'S all I have to say to this on

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/19/2014 2:04:00 PM

Don't delete, it's to funny. I love it. Go girly girl.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/19/2014 2:07:00 PM

Really??? HA HA HA HA! I was hoping for seductive, but...I guess funny will do. I guess that makes it more kosher! Thanks, Brenda. I'm a silly goose! I am! I am used to getting my way. It does frustrate me when I don't!! Temper Temper!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/19/2014 1:49:00 PM

Its nice to want need someone on demand.Somehow this poem transmits the power of a woman to get what She wants,when She wants it.You rock.girl!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/20/2014 5:01:00 AM

This I didn't understand, Tristen. It's rather too graphic.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/19/2014 1:52:00 PM

Will probably delete this in a bit. A bit much...I was in a MOOD when I wrote it. I grew up getting what I want. I guess I never got rid of that trait. ;) Take care, sweetie. Thanks for the visit.