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"Looking back at the Earth, I can't really describe how beautiful it is from 300 miles up. Looking down, you can tell it's a planet. The sky is black. There's just a thin blue ribbon, what we see as blue sky on Earth. You realize how small it is and how fragile the planet is." - Astronaut Mike Good All we are seeing around us is utter and absolute Blackness The image seared into our brains is Desolation a blanket of the densest darkest threads through which no light can seem to enter is above us and below us At last in the vast expanse of nothingness just a thin ribbon of blue sublime and beautiful comes into view Our collective pulse quickens Faint light can be seen! The phrase Hope springs eternal is in my mind. Our gloom is fading, for our home planet has already endured long past the point when God first said Let there be light Written May 11, 2016 for the "Just a Thin Blue Ribbon" Poetry contest of Rita A. Simmonds.

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Date: 5/16/2016 9:11:00 AM
Wow, this is powerful and brings to light how an astronaut must feel seeing our planet.
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Date: 5/14/2016 12:54:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me.Way to go. Enjoyed reading your work.Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Date: 5/14/2016 7:36:00 AM
Beautiful! good luck with the contest. ~Abosede.
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Date: 5/13/2016 12:18:00 PM
Your expression of the blue sky and the earth from afar, was captivating, and the construction of the poem, so complementary. Reads like a winner!
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Date: 5/13/2016 11:43:00 AM
Imaging from afar. I like this in an abstract sense also. Great work, Andrea. First prize for sure.. I'll try to catch up. Love, daver
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Date: 5/13/2016 9:28:00 AM
Wonderfully done. "all we are seeing around us is utter and absolute blackness" such a deep dark tone that fades when god says let there be light. very good. :)
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Date: 5/13/2016 7:12:00 AM
Absolutely stunning dear, Andrea! Good luck!
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Date: 5/12/2016 10:19:00 PM
andrea this is beautifully and skillfully written 7
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Date: 5/12/2016 3:26:00 PM
an interesting take and point of view, as though you were in space..good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/12/2016 12:42:00 PM
Andrea, I just love when you write this way ... in the more free-verse fashion. An excellent interpretation of the prompt "Just a Thin Blue Ribbon" ... beautiful and artistic ... a Fave!
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Date: 5/12/2016 10:21:00 AM
Andrea, WOW, the end of the beginning. you are just plain marvelous........... SKAT
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Date: 5/12/2016 6:40:00 AM
Nicely penned Andrea...best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 5/12/2016 3:11:00 AM
I must say first dear poet, WOW! And then, hello young lady, it was certainly a pleasure reading you ! Miss you Andrea, have a beautiful day... Much love, james
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Date: 5/12/2016 2:29:00 AM
How marvellous!! You write in all forms so amazingly.. Good luck in the contest, dear Andrea; hope this does very well!! :) :)
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