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Olena Rudenko met Pavlo Lavinski whilst at Kyiv University Pavlo told all his friends that she's definitely the girl for me They got on well then fell in love and had planned to wed But like the rest of Ukraine were oblivious to what lay ahead. They had both studied medicine and had now qualified And they applied to the same clinic working side by side They both worked long hours and saved all their money Planned a wedding in June when it would be warm and sunny. They were driving home one late evening both feeling jaded And heard the news on the car radio that Russia had invaded They were shocked and couldn't believe they were now at war Both walked in stoney silence up the steps to their front door. President Zelensky addressed the nation calling for volunteers And as all the young and old signed up many women were in tears Pavlo volunteered as a medic and was sent off to the front line Whilst Olena stayed at the clinic; Pavlo assured her he'd be fine. The weeks and months rolled on by and it was now early in May. And both vowed that by late June they'd have their wedding day They sent invites to family and friends for their joyful occasion Determined they both were to go ahead, despite the invasion. Pavlo couldn't contact her often for fear of giving his position away But he managed to once a fortnight and both had plenty to say Pavlo had saved many soldiers and civilians with his medical skill Couldn't grasp why the Russians only wanted to maim and to kill. Pavlo was granted a weeks special leave for the last week in June Told Olena he couldn't wait and they'd be husband and wife soon Olena kept herself busy organising the church and party venue And bought streamers and balloons of bright yellow and blue. Pavlo had travelled by train at night and he was now heading south When he arrived at Kyiv station Olena was there when he stepped out She ran toward him and they embraced and Olena cried tears of joy Then she whispered "I've missed you so much my darling soldier boy". Both couldn't wait for the next day when they would finally marry That night Olena went to stay with an old girlfriend from university The next day Pavlo was at the church and Olena was on her way Then realised she'd forgotten a bracelet she'd wanted to wear that day. She asked the taxi driver to quickly turn around and to take her back And knew that she'd still have plenty of time to get back on track As she was going up the elevator she heard the loud air raid sound There was a huge explosion and she plummeted toward the ground. A Russian missile had hit the tall block and reduced it to rubble Fire crews had become used to it and were there on the double The taximan drove to the church to break news of the tragedy Pavlo told him "take me there, she might be alive; I have to see". They quickly arrived at the scene that was once a tall tower block Pavlo went pale and started shaking he then collapsed with shock Two medics put him in an ambulance and it was soon on its way Horror had replaced joy on what should have been their wedding day. He suffered a nervous breakdown and was discharged from the army He couldn't accept that his sweetheart Olena was gone for all eternity All that went through his mind was Olena should have been his wife Two months later the darkness overcame him and he took his own life. Written on 29th April 2023

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Date: 1/21/2024 3:34:00 PM
I sit here is awe that you are able to bring the war to all of us in real terms. It is such a shame that there are fellow inhabitants of this planet who would destroy and waste our effort on objectives that do not enhance our future and just support evil intent. This mentality is so disturbing, and yet so many are oblivious.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/21/2024 11:40:00 PM
Thank you very much Duke I fully agree, it is a beautiful world and everyone should strive to make it even better, just think if billions that are spent on arms were used to provide homes for the homeless, medical aid for everyone, even in remote places and enough food for the starving. We can only but hope. Tom
Date: 6/10/2023 10:29:00 AM
Tom my friend, I have only just seen you got POTD for this outstanding poem, so called back with congratulations galore. Blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 6/10/2023 11:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer, although a fictional write there has been many tragedies in Ukraine that we hear about daily. I tried to convey what it's really like there, you cant sugarcoat what's happening there. Tom
Date: 6/5/2023 1:20:00 PM
Wow!! That is a sad one. I am sure that is happening quite often over there. I have kin whose wife has kin over there working as missionaries and did not come home when they could have and they had to escape from invading Russian army twice. I haven't heard from them in a while so I don't know how they are doing or where they are now. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 6/5/2023 3:40:00 PM
Thank you very much Sara, many couples serving in the Ukrainian armed forces have been happily married and were dressed in military uniforms and it was that that inspired me, sadly many over there haven't been so lucky. I hope that Russia pays a heavy price for what they have done to the people of Ukraine. Tom
Date: 6/3/2023 11:37:00 PM
An incredible story Tom one of your best. Congratulations on receiving POTD Honors well deserving my friend...
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Date: 6/3/2023 11:52:00 PM
Thank you very much Michael, I'd seen many couple getting married in army uniforms in Ukraine and that was the inspiration for this write. Its dragging on too long I just hope Putin can be defeated and peace restored to Ukraine who didn't deserve this invasion. Tom
Date: 5/30/2023 1:08:00 PM
I now see POTD here. Way to go, Tom,
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Date: 5/30/2023 2:43:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea. Tom
Date: 5/14/2023 3:33:00 AM
What a tragedy! You have paid tribute to both of them and at the same time you paid tribute to love. A FAVE is the least I can give, my dearest friend, Tom. Such an extraordinary piece of literature. God bless their souls. Congratulations. Blessings.
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Date: 5/14/2023 3:56:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios I was inspired by many Ukrainian couples getting married in uniform and after the celebrations heading back to the front line. Thank you very much for faving it. Tom
Date: 5/10/2023 11:43:00 AM
Such a heart wrenching tale, Tom: I hope they are now together in heaven and that their love story last for eternity. The sad horrors of war are all too vivid in this remarkable POTD SuZ
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Date: 5/10/2023 12:19:00 PM
Thank you very much Suz I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. I just hope that Putin is defeated and I hope Ukraine still gets the support it needs. Tom
Date: 5/9/2023 2:41:00 PM
You have me in tears Tom, hugs to you. Your precious pen writes reality of this horrendous viciousness. Hugs, and congratulations, I see this was a POTD!
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Date: 5/9/2023 6:37:00 PM
Thank you very much BJ, invading a peaceful nation like Ukraine is a crime against humanity, Putin must not be allowed to get away with it. I hope you are keeping well. Tom
Date: 5/9/2023 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations, Tom, on POTD!
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Date: 5/9/2023 1:57:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Kim. Tom
Date: 5/3/2023 9:54:00 AM
wow, such a sad tale, Tom. You are a great narrator.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/3/2023 11:06:00 PM
Always backwards.
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Date: 5/3/2023 10:30:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea, I'm happy that you enjoyed it. People's lives can change in seconds in war, can't believe it's happening in this modern age. Mankind seems to be going backwards. Tom
Date: 5/3/2023 8:06:00 AM
WoW! Tom, You are such a good storyteller. This tragic story of love and loss held my attention from start to finish. I don't understand war and I never will. Congratulations on a well-deserved poem of the day honor. Have a great day-Alexis
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Date: 5/3/2023 10:28:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Alexis, they're are no real winners in war and it's the civilians who cop the brunt of it. Hope you're keeping well and I hope you too have a lovely day. Tom
Date: 5/3/2023 6:16:00 AM
We only know the moment. Past is gone, future is ahead. A touching write Tom. Congratulations on POTD! :)
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Date: 5/3/2023 6:21:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Linda, nobody ever knows how long they have, every minute is precious especially in a war zone. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Date: 5/3/2023 12:15:00 AM
Always happy to see your name up there Sir Tom…A very well deserved POTD! Debx
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Date: 5/3/2023 12:23:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats and return visit Deb. Much appreciated. Soup mail. Tom
Date: 5/2/2023 7:25:00 PM
So deep …. A sad beautiful story of love and what might have been . There is no glory to war , no romance , only ugliness and death . Your story pulls at my heart . Wonderful writing as always dear Tom . Congratulations on you POTD! Susan :)
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Date: 5/2/2023 11:49:00 PM
Thank you very much Susan for your congratulations, Joy can quickly turn to horror in a war zone as we see daily in Ukraine. I admire them for standing up to that bully in the Kremlin. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 5/2/2023 7:08:00 PM
I’m glad to see your work of art show cased as POTD. Congratulations my friend!!
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Date: 5/2/2023 11:42:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats and return visit Mark, much appreciated. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Date: 5/2/2023 7:04:00 PM
Tom, what's happening in Ukraine is tragic, and so many are affected by the events taking place. Your thoughts touch my heart so deeply. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 5/2/2023 11:41:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congratulations Brandy, Putin is a bully and thought he could just walk in and take over but Ukrainians are strong and proud people who love their country. We must continue to give them all the support they need to repel the evil invaders. Tom
Date: 5/2/2023 6:51:00 PM
Never a doubt in my mind, Tom. One of your best ever, and that's saying a lot! Well-deserved POTD, my friend.
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Date: 5/2/2023 11:22:00 PM
Thank you very much Gershon, much appreciated, As the war drags on I want to keep it in people's minds what's going on in Ukraine, I don't want it to become old news. Tom
Date: 5/2/2023 5:42:00 PM
Back with heartfelt congratulations for the POTD, that I already previewed. Enjoy your honor, Tom.
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Date: 5/2/2023 11:19:00 PM
Thank you Lasaad for return visit and congratulations. Much appreciated. Tom
Date: 5/2/2023 5:27:00 PM
Back!! With hugs, champagne abd Congratylations, Tom. Celebrate today, Panagiota
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Date: 5/2/2023 11:18:00 PM
Thank you Pangie, for your congrats and return visit. A nice surprise this morning. Tom
Date: 5/2/2023 4:34:00 PM
Tom, back to congratulate you on POTD, a well-deserved honor!
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Date: 5/2/2023 11:17:00 PM
Thanks very much Tania for your congrats and return visit. Tom
Date: 5/2/2023 3:33:00 PM
Congratulations, Tom, on POTD. A sad tale love and war.
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Date: 5/2/2023 3:45:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Eve. A lot of heart break in Ukraine at the moment. Cant believe it's still going on in this day and age. Tom
Date: 5/2/2023 1:51:00 PM
What a sad poignant poem about the juxtaposition of love and war. I admire how you can tell a story and have a rhyme scheme throughout. Well done & congrats on Poem of the Day! Sara Etgen-Baker
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Date: 5/2/2023 2:32:00 PM
Thank you very much Sara I'm happy that you enjoyed it despite it ending in tragedy. I hope you had a lovely 40th celebration. Tom
Date: 5/2/2023 11:51:00 AM
Such a sad story of war and love, Congrats on POTD Tom..
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Date: 5/2/2023 11:55:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Joseph Every day we hear of nothing but heartbreak in Ukraine all caused by one physchopath. Tom
Date: 5/2/2023 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations Tom on POTD. The first casualty when war comes is the truth. A sad tale of senseless loss.
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Date: 5/2/2023 11:45:00 AM
Thank you very much Daniel for your congrats, your words are so true. Tom
Date: 5/2/2023 11:18:00 AM
Tom congratulations on your POTD. This is truly a heartbreaking story of tragic, needless, loss! It breaks my heart but I am happy to know it is fiction! So glad you are home from holiday! Blessings to you! Over Fork Over.
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Date: 5/2/2023 11:43:00 AM
Thank you for your congratulations Sam, sometimes life is not always joy especially in Ukraine where every day we hear heartbreaking news. Hope your day is going well Over Fork Over. Tom
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