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Inspired by the contest about limerick

Old McDonald Old McDonald sold all his farms for tending pets had lost his charms He found a new job He thought it was fab But a whole day clown with raised arms March 21, 2014 5.15 pm Eighth Place Contest: Yay for St. Patrick's Day-One Limerick Part 2 Judged: 3/29/14 Sponsor: Poet Andrea Dietrich

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Angie Thomas

Date: 4/22/2015 2:43:00 AM

aww... so sad old McDonald sold his farm :( but a very nice write Leonora, one that made me smile :)

Len Gasun
Date: 4/25/2015 9:03:00 AM

:))) Yeah, old McDonald must not have done it my very dear friend, Angie so that he will not suffer that kind of consequence :)))). Thank you so much for sharing your precious time reading and commenting on my poem. God bless! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora

James Fraser

Date: 7/7/2014 1:36:00 PM

Old MacDonald in Limerick style, love it Loenora. Many thanks for the chuckle this lovely Summer evening, James :)

Len Gasun
Date: 4/25/2015 8:51:00 AM

Oh, thank you so much ( so belated) my very dear friend, James. I'm so sorry, I think I've missed to give you a reply here before. But i'm really very thankful for your lovely feedback. Sending many hugs to you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2014 10:40:00 PM

HELLO SWEET SIS.. IT WAS NICE HEARING YOUR VOICE TONIGHT... THANK YOU FOR THE SMILE.... ENJOYED IT THE FORST TIME O READ IT, AND NOW.... , NICE SEEING YOU ON ANDREA'S WINNING LIST... Congratulations!!! LUV YOU FOREVER.. YOUR BFF****LINDA

Len Gasun
Date: 4/5/2014 3:59:00 PM

Hope you & your family will have a great weekend! Biggest hugs to u & to everyone! Please give my sweetest regards. tysm

Len Gasun
Date: 4/5/2014 3:56:00 PM

You're very much welcome my dearest sis & BFF! Biggest hugs! Thank u ever so much as well. Thank u so much for your warm congratulatory greetings! I love u forever too. More hugs!

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/31/2014 6:20:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Leonora! Love, Kim

Len Gasun
Date: 4/5/2014 3:57:00 PM

Thank u so much my dear friend Kim! Biggest hugs!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/30/2014 6:35:00 AM

It's Sunday and happy to enjoy the fun and humor. Congrats on the win, leo

Len Gasun
Date: 4/5/2014 3:58:00 PM

Thank u so much my dear friend Dr. Ram. Biggest hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2014 10:20:00 PM

Leonora, when I read the last line, I pictured one of those guys that goes outside the fast food place dressed up as Mcdonald and waving a sign over his head to get people to stop and eat there. Did I get that right in your last line? A cute idea! Congrats in my contest, sweetie.

Len Gasun
Date: 4/5/2014 4:04:00 PM

;))))))) that can also be right my dearest friend Andrea. When I wrote this poem. I thought of McDonald Restaurant with the statue clown raised his arms, others have even the M signs on the head using their arms :)))) Thank u ever so much for loving my poems and my placement! Biggest hugs! More blessings! Happy weekend to u & your family!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/29/2014 10:01:00 AM

Have me smiling with this Limerick. love phyl

Len Gasun
Date: 4/5/2014 4:06:00 PM

I'm so happy to know that my limerick gave you smiles my dear friend Phyllis! Thank u sooo much again! So happy to hear from u. More blessings & good health!

Donna Jones

Date: 3/27/2014 11:26:00 PM

Still smiling...:-) :-) :-) thanks...

Len Gasun
Date: 4/5/2014 4:08:00 PM

I'm so happy to know that my limerick gave you smiles my dear friend Donna. Thank u so much for sparing your precious time to come & enjoy my poem. More blessings!

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 3/22/2014 12:22:00 PM

hahaha nice one.. like it. It makes me smile on this sleepy moment. 12:21 A.M. already..zzzzzzzz Have a blessed day my dear friend Norie.. We sleep now ok hahahah :)

Len Gasun
Date: 3/24/2014 12:37:00 AM

:)))) thank u so much my dear friend Mary.. you slept so late...;))) Have a blessed day!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/21/2014 7:01:00 PM

Very witty...thought for a second that he was going to join Burger King, but was wrong :) // paul

Len Gasun
Date: 3/22/2014 5:16:00 AM

;)))) TYSM for your precious time stopping by and your nice comments my dear friend Paul. Your comment made me smile. So sad he chose McDo Rest my dear friend & he will be spending 24 hours as clown with raised arms to promote/beckon the children for the yummy burgers, fried chicken & French fries;)))) TYSSM again. Big hugs!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/21/2014 6:53:00 PM

very good Leonora nice twist hugs

Len Gasun
Date: 3/22/2014 5:12:00 AM

TYSM my dear friend Shadow. Have a very happy birthday again. I wish u all the best in life! Biggest hugs!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2014 10:36:00 AM

Hello, my BFF... How are you?? Thank you for stopping by my page.... I had fun reading, and making fun of old McDonald, trading his farm, for a silly job... LOL.. I never liked the pigs on his farm, :)... I like the Limerick, fun everyone is having... Is this for a contest , sis? If so, I wish you luck, thanks for the smiles... always love love.. Linda

Len Gasun
Date: 3/22/2014 5:09:00 AM

Hi, my loving sis & BFF! I'm doin fine so far despite my sched. At least, load of work got lighter now as we end the sem. & am anticipating for summer class. How about u? I hope u're always fine my dearest sis & so w/ ur family. TYSM for your precious time stopping by & 4 enjoying my poem. I'm tryin the contest of our dear friend Andrea. TYSM 4 wishing me luck. I'm so honored & extremely happy to hear from u. Biggest hugs my dearest sis & bff. More blessings! tc!

Aiyah Torres

Date: 3/21/2014 8:20:00 AM

ha ha... this is sooo funny!!! ..:')).. Happy weekend to you, Leo!! ^_^

Len Gasun
Date: 3/22/2014 4:58:00 AM

I'm glad my poem gave u smiles my dear friend Aiyah. TYSM again for your precious time stopping by and your nice comments. Happy weekend as well to u! Big hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/21/2014 7:53:00 AM

- Leonora this was fun to read .... love to read limeric .... but can not write it myself ...... like B. W. : "I am terrible at them" - Well done. - Hope your weekend will be beautiful. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 3/22/2014 4:56:00 AM

TYSM again for your precious time stopping by and your nice comments my dear friend Anne Lise. I found difficulty in writing this form of poem as well. But I just tried again. I hope the sponsor will appreciate. Again TYTYSM my dear friend and have a beautiful wkend as well. Big hugs!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/21/2014 7:52:00 AM

Cute one...Old MacDonald probably needed a change just like most of us from time to time..Way to go ...Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Len Gasun
Date: 3/22/2014 4:52:00 AM

;))))). You're much welcome my dear friend Sara. TYSM as well for your nice comments. Big hugs!

Constance La France

Date: 3/21/2014 7:46:00 AM

Leonora, this is great, I like Limericks but I am terrible at them, well done, I also want to thank you so much for my placement in your Poem For Mommy Contest, I am very honoured.

Len Gasun
Date: 3/22/2014 4:51:00 AM

You're welcome my dear friend BW. I'm honored as well by my win in your latest contest and your visit on my poem. TYTYSSM and more blessings! Big hugs!

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/21/2014 6:57:00 AM

This is fantastic, such a grandiose write my friend! I truly loved reading this awesome poem here this morning! What a delightful piece Leonora! I'm sorry I haven't been on lately! I've been having internet problems, that is why I haven't been on! They even told me that I will be without internet soon again before it will be fixed, so that is why I'm trying to get to everybody before I'm out again! But that is why I haven't been on lately!

Len Gasun
Date: 3/22/2014 4:49:00 AM

Thank u so much again my dear friend Russell for your precious time stopping by my poem & your very inspiring comments. I'm so sorry to hear about your internet problems but I hope it'll b fixed soon. Again, thank u so much. Biggest hugs!