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Old King Troll For Alexis Y

Old King Troll Had a very long pole And a very long pole had he He called for his wife (she’s his trouble and strife) And he called for his mistresses three King Troll sat in the middle … his wife said you’re on the fiddle This fact King Troll couldn’t deny All the women took a swipe at him and gave him a black eye! Alexis challenged me to do a parody of Old King Cole nursery rhyme 10~03~16

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/24/2016 8:24:00 AM

Well fiddlesticks! I missed this one first time around:-( huggaroskies ! ~ j

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2016 8:43:00 AM

It is my least commented on poem so it is getting a new lease of life with the new contest:-) love your handsome mug lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/3/2016 1:56:00 PM

Haha, you are just pure awesome. I'm just strolling by checking out some my favorite an recent commenters. A pleasure to read. Bet Alexis enjoyed this... by the way, I have a new best friend named. ALEXA... :) WUV YA... LINDA (MISS YOU)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2016 2:33:00 PM

ha ha ha Linda:-) Sock it to him in your poems!!!:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 10/3/2016 1:58:00 PM

Ps...the king cole I know deserves more than a black eye...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/3/2016 10:37:00 AM

You are a master of such stories dear, Jean! Amusing! Loved it!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2016 2:33:00 PM

Thanks Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/3/2016 8:08:00 AM

Lol ! Hi Jan, I love it! You certainly met the challenge and rewrote my favorite nursery rhyme "Old King Cole".You out did yourself with this one. It is hilarious. I knew you could do it but this is better than I imagined it would be. Thank you so much. A Big seven and a fav:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2016 2:32:00 PM

Oh Alexis I don't know how but my comment disappeared:-) so glad you enjoyed my silly take on the nursery rhyme:-) hugs jan xx