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Old Jack the Halloween Scrooge

Old Jack hated Halloween night. The constant ringing of his doorbell he didn't like. So he turned off his household lights. His wife said, "Why did you go and do that, Jack?" he replied "They won't see the house, and I'll get some rest!" Little did Jack know that the Trick or Treaters were determined. They found his house, rang his doorbell and Jacks anger just worsened! Every time Jack got up from his easy chair, you could hear him mumbling to himself, and start to swear! The little kids would yell, "Trick or Treat!" Jack would throw the candy in their bags, and say half jokingly, OK now let me be! The doorbell would ring over and over again. Each time the dog would bark and Jack would cringe! His wife would say, "Jack why do you have to be so mean?" His reply was, "These kids drive me insane, non stop, that's why I hate this Halloween!" "Every year it's the same old thing. The doorbell rings, and rings!" His wife said, "Jack can't you see the joy you bring?" "It doesn't matter if the doorbell rings,and rings." "My parent's never took me Trick or Treating. So, I never did experience what little boys and girls are feeling." She felt sad for Jack she took him by the hand and said," It's never too late Jack, if you are willing." They joined a group of children, as they stopped and got some treats. The homeowners looked at Jack in wide- eyed disbelief! He noticed all the fun the children felt, as they went from door to door! And he felt a joy overtake his heart, and something much, much, more! He and his wife said goodbye to their little friends that night. And Jack became a little boy, as he relived his boyhood side. Every year since he changed his ways. Jack can't wait. To hear the footsteps of his little friends, come, Halloween day! His house lights are on, and his wife is by his side. With a great big smile he answers the door, and acts frighteningly surprised! The children love Jack, it's their favorite house to go. He fills their bags with so much candy, their bags just overflow. Screwed IX Contest Rob Carmack

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/16/2015 7:53:00 PM
Brilliantly creative writing my friend. Halloween was always a fun night for kids.. Running , playing and collecting sweets! Trick or treat was a night to be remembered when I was a kid--over 50+ years ago.A7
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/18/2015 10:31:00 PM
Robert thank you so much for your kind comments. I remember like you when I was out there with my bag full of candy.45 years ago for me.
Date: 10/10/2015 6:06:00 PM
Dear Michael Excellent dude, wonderfully done love it, a marvelous scrooge for Halloween love it's lesson and moral, it made me laugh, a seven all the way. Cheri
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/10/2015 6:11:00 PM
Thanks Cheri. I'm happy you were laughing.
Date: 10/9/2015 7:55:00 AM
Michael , I love this piece. To see Jack embrace Halloween by connecting with the little boy inside was such an amazing sight.Great job! :-) Alexis P. S. I see Jack liked it as well.
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/9/2015 5:51:00 PM
Thank you Alexis for your kind comments. He did. I'm happy he did. We love Jack he is a gentleman and he has a great sense of humor that many on the Soup adore.
Date: 10/9/2015 7:55:00 AM
How delightful now it is a favorite of mine as well.
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/9/2015 5:49:00 PM
Richard so happy you liked it to make it one of your favorites. I am honored. It feels good when you can receive such feedback. Hope you are doing well my friend.
Date: 10/9/2015 4:44:00 AM
What a well written piece.....the flow of your depicted imagery that makes your write met with the reader like and love. Excellent one...........A.M.
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Date: 10/9/2015 1:04:00 AM
The conversion of Halloween Scrooge. Remarkable Job Michael
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/9/2015 3:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Joan.
Date: 10/8/2015 9:33:00 PM
a winsome tale portraying the fun spirit of hallow,michael... the lights are on!.. huggs
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/8/2015 11:22:00 PM
Huggs back nette. I enjoyed writing this.
Date: 10/8/2015 3:36:00 PM
wow, what a great tale about a guy who changes his mind by finally LIVING this fun event. I used to go trick or treating with my babies. Dressed up right along with them and some sour people did not even want to give me a treat. Geeez, can you believe it?
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/8/2015 3:49:00 PM
Andrea I cant believe someone would not give you and your kiddies treats. That sounds pathetic. The people that gave made up for the ones that didn't. Life's experiences never seize to amaze me.
Date: 10/8/2015 3:22:00 PM
Bet he has the good candy...excellent
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/8/2015 3:46:00 PM
He has the best candy Tim. Thank you for your generous rating.
Date: 10/8/2015 8:40:00 AM
A wonderful dedication,Michael.
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/8/2015 3:44:00 PM
Thanks Miraj hope you are doing well my friend.
Date: 10/8/2015 8:17:00 AM
No matter what we are going to write about old, young, Jack, still a lot will be left to say! Great work my friend, Michael!
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/8/2015 3:44:00 PM
Demetrios you are right. Thank you for your observations. I will be stopping by in a minute. To see your new creations.
Date: 10/8/2015 6:42:00 AM
I am honoured Michael Tor!!! You have nailed me good!!! My lights will be on! Good write that hit home! Happy Hall'o ween!
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/8/2015 6:49:00 AM
Jack I hoped you enjoyed this. Happy Halloween to you my friend. I'll be visiting later on after work. I'm so happy you liked this Jack.
Date: 10/8/2015 6:32:00 AM
hmmmmmm this has to be Jack Ellison...good one ...thanks
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/8/2015 6:50:00 AM
Yes Judy your so right lol.
Date: 10/8/2015 4:38:00 AM
- A wonderful Halloween story, Michael :) - Old Jack, got the pleasure of experiencing the excitement and the joy :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/8/2015 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.

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