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Ojo Caliente

Where the chug of boiling water pumps and spills its acids, oxides, to dye the ice-slabbed hillside orange-red desert colors, we loll naked in a pool lulled half-asleep; first drugged in a broth of minerals shot from the earth´s core, then dragged down to a nether place where the chill of air is salt, sunwarmth, sugar, until what is known is only what is sensed: far down below there´s no stations of the seasons, no days passing, only this thrashing deeper, coupling, uncoupling in unsunned wetness where all beginnings are.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 6:54:00 AM
Douglas - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/12/2008 4:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:33:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/4/2008 11:30:00 PM
Douglas - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 9/2/2008 7:18:00 AM
Congratulations Douglas on the featuring of your poem "Ojo Caliente." Vince
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Date: 9/1/2008 7:53:00 PM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week - Sounds like a special place - God Bless
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Date: 8/31/2008 6:33:00 PM
Congratulations Douglas on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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