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< B y G r i l l W i T h J i L L C r A c K i N G A t B i l l W h O T O o K S i X O x I C o T t O N s A n D G o T I L L O H W h A t A S p I L L Entry For Nikko Palmario's Life Without U & Me G.L. All Hate Cleaning Up After Someone Else's Spills LOL GL ALL IN Contest

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Date: 7/4/2010 9:53:00 AM
Loved this piece here.. I'm new so have mercy and I hope you have an open mind my styles pretty different. Enjoy ya day
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Date: 6/29/2010 7:58:00 PM
Hello Sis, you're right on the money with this one. I guess Jill was under the hill, and where was Bill? Have mercy today; this is reality at its best! Good luck with the contest. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/27/2010 2:02:00 PM
very creative and humorous within a touch of not so humorous' realities so often it does seem-i'm enjoying these different presentations and topics of expression and creativity within this poetic place of many gifted verses-wonderful job, no one likes to clean up such messes as this perhaps! love, christopher :)
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Date: 6/27/2010 12:41:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with the interesting work..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/27/2010 11:49:00 AM
Funny, yet so sad, soup mail
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Date: 6/27/2010 11:16:00 AM
A chuckle came out of this. Good luck on the contest. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 6/27/2010 10:49:00 AM
LOL...thank you ....you made me smile with this wonderful write.....Michael
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