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Ode To the Dreamy Girl

People turn to her and say, "Why are you like this? Like a girl of modern day, Dress up a bit, miss. Don't sit with books all day long, There's a world outside, you know, These fairy tales won't help you Live. Life's not a dreamy song. You'll see beyond the rainbow Some day - those dark gruesome hues." She would smile at them and tell, "I'm better off here, With my books in my snug shell, Life can't be severe." Once they left, she'd sit and cry, Why would they not let her be? Could she not have her own dreams? Should she answer their each why? Would they not let her shine free, Like those distant white moonbeams? They who judged her by her looks, Did they know her pain? She was hiding in her books From abusive strain; Divorced parents did not care, Grandma blamed her for their split, Beat her up, locked in a room; Was it wrong for her to dare To read and dream of what's writ? To set her mind free from gloom? 07/27/17

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Date: 8/27/2017 10:25:00 AM
Lost in books on lost in computers and cell phones it's all the same these days. I don't know why these people won't leave us lonely hearts alone. Great write.
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Date: 8/8/2017 7:28:00 PM
Sad but introspective poem of a young woman reading her dreams and escaping her reality. My compliments to you indeed!
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Date: 8/7/2017 5:25:00 PM
Jo. This is a really nice character study of a girl lost in books. I got lost in them too as a child. Thank goodness it was not to escape abuse that I did it!!
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Date: 8/5/2017 12:06:00 PM
Beautiful piece, dear. We can never know why people behave the way they do. We can only offer kindness. We are all walking wounded. Hugs
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Date: 8/2/2017 2:32:00 PM
such an impressive, sad write ...i like how the thought process led to a girl's painful plight, jo.. you wow!..huggs
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Date: 8/1/2017 11:18:00 AM
Beautiful, moving write, Jo! Janice
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Date: 8/1/2017 10:37:00 AM
Truly a solace! To read, to write, to dream... Love it, Jo! A fave.
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Date: 8/1/2017 10:34:00 AM
This is a beautiful tribute to all who sadly feel safe in retreating into a fantasy world to help them cope with a cruel life. Superbly written my friend! : )
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Date: 8/1/2017 9:08:00 AM
This is beautifully depicted. Also what a gorgeous sensitive photo.
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Date: 7/31/2017 4:36:00 AM
You are a beautiful soul, my friend...that's all that counts...love has no shape or form...we poets are the bringers of love...as God is are testament...great write my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 7/29/2017 9:58:00 AM
The theme of your poem is so relatable, especially as poets or any artistic person for that matter has to face too many whys...Fantastic poem, Jo.
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Date: 7/28/2017 10:21:00 PM
The escape in our heads, beautifully said.
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Date: 7/28/2017 1:59:00 PM
She finds freedom in her books...Nicely penned Jo
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Date: 7/28/2017 12:54:00 PM
It happens everyday, and your probing pen brought to light this sad reality lived by some, Jo. Very strong images of sadness and brave resilience. Wonderful poem. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 7/28/2017 11:48:00 AM
- Heartbreaking ... let her dream - A wonderful poem, Jo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/28/2017 11:26:00 AM
When no-one around cares and she herself alone finds what else is left but consolation in the books to seek her wounds to heal with knowledge divine? dear, Jo! A marvelous Ode dear sister!
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Date: 7/28/2017 8:39:00 AM
Wow, this is so well expressed and absolutely heartbreaking. I can feel for her so much in this poem. !
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Date: 7/28/2017 8:32:00 AM
That last stanza is so sad Jo! A beautifully written ode!
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