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Don’t love me yet, stranger
I belong to a universe full of riddles
I wouldn’t really know how to love you back
Though I would never hurt you ever

I dreamt your arms tightening around me
In moon grips from time, that I cant let unfold
Don’t dream of me yet, stranger, let go for now
Until time comes around, looking for us

I walk thru icy winds, my fears kissed
Kisses from the breeze on your beautiful face
From far away worlds, where my sanity wont go
As I tread true on this impossibility that’s you

Let me play this distance between us, stranger
Don’t let love touch us yet, lest I come to you
I have stories I belong to, songs that cant hold us
But give me a choice and know that it would be you…

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  1. Date: 12/10/2014 7:17:00 AM
    Great style. Great voice!~Joel

  1. Date: 9/13/2014 11:08:00 PM
    Your voice has a tender wisdom, I love how tempered your passion is, unselfish yet hungry, its very beautiful Bindu. You are True in this, and this Art , " Untill time comes around looking for us...I have stories I belong to, songs that can't hold us." Sexy suspense and honesty. J.A.B.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 9/17/2014 12:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, dear Justin! hugs.
  1. Date: 6/4/2014 3:28:00 PM
    JUst noticing how you use stranger sometimes in your love poems, Bindu!! ARe you like me and dreaming of strangers? Most of the time, the men in my dreams are ones I do not even know!!

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 6/5/2014 7:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) there was a time when I used to write to 'phantom', yes, to a stranger.. long back, during some 12 years of living solo.. but this was written to someone who is now my partner:) have a perfect day, Andrea. its so cool to see you visiting my earlier posts, thank you.
  1. Date: 4/24/2014 10:56:00 AM
    Beautiful romantic poem where imagery flows at will. The wait...it raises the level of expectancy and anticipation...till time is ripe. /x/ paul

  1. Date: 4/8/2014 9:33:00 PM
    Bindu, I just dropped by to say hi. But I do luv this poem! What a great theme, and how skillfully you articulate it. Let me play this distance? Been on both sides of that. Well done my friend. Bye for now. xoxo Mel

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 4/9/2014 3:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the kind comment, Mel. Its good to see your visits.
  1. Date: 4/3/2014 8:55:00 PM
    Just seeing one of the Best Bindu poems again. Isn't that cool that we can click on all our fave poets here and see their BEST poems??

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 4/4/2014 1:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    How lovely that you visit my earlier posts, Andrea, thank you! have a great weekend, girl!
  1. Date: 3/27/2014 1:29:00 AM
    my mind is honestly blown...very inspiring write. more fire my friend

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 3/27/2014 9:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, dear Ray, Im glad you like this poem..
  1. Date: 3/4/2014 5:01:00 AM
    Mesmerizing lines and there we see that recurrent theme in every stanza. This is right up par with your standard : )

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 3/4/2014 6:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Mustapha! its great to have your comments.
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 7:05:00 AM
    Dreams, time, distance, longing, anticipation, this one has it all! "Songs that can't hold us" I love that line.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 3/1/2014 3:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Monterey, I am glad you liked this poem:)
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 12:46:00 AM
    Holy GOOSEBUMPS, Batman! Creating that need/want through that slight tension of distance. Impeccable. "I belong to a universe full of riddles"...hard hitting line!

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 3/1/2014 3:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Drake, its always cool to have your comments.
  1. Date: 2/25/2014 10:59:00 PM
    Wow Bindu, this is a poem full of imagery and power. I love your use of words and how you put them together. "I walked thru icy winds, my fears kissed" Wow what words!!! Great write! :) xoxo

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 2/26/2014 9:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Chris:)
  1. Date: 2/25/2014 7:37:00 PM
    Leaves him breathless, I'm sure.....how could one resist? Lovely writing, Bindu !

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 2/25/2014 8:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, dear Carrie, what a lovely comment!
  1. Date: 2/25/2014 9:44:00 AM
    A lovely write Bindu..

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 2/25/2014 8:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Ken:)
  1. Date: 2/25/2014 8:44:00 AM
    not yet time for a new, stunning write?.. helo bindu!.. huggs

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 2/25/2014 8:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) hello Nettie! hugs...
  1. Date: 2/25/2014 8:30:00 AM
    Thanks Bindu, it is my day off today and the Sun is shining. I send some sun in your direction. I hope it arrives and shines brightly upon your face.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 2/25/2014 8:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Tons of sun here, dear Richard. I would send you some the next time winter screams:)
  1. Date: 2/24/2014 5:54:00 PM
    nice poem. nice read...

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 2/24/2014 10:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Mohammad, thank you for stopping by, I am happy you like this poem. have a great week.
  1. Date: 2/24/2014 8:03:00 AM
    Good morning Bindu, I hope you are greeted with a sunny and wonderful Monday. Take care.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 2/24/2014 10:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Richard, how nice to hear from you, what a lovely greeting, hope you have a wonderful week too. Be well yourself, take care of you, and yours.
  1. Date: 2/24/2014 7:31:00 AM
    I forgot to mention, yesterday night Aldo and I watched a movie called Bicycle Bride, it is about an girl from India who falls in love with a white fellow, it's a comedy, but it has lots of tender moments, you should check it out, it was a lovely movie, funny to boot xxx

    Rose Avatar Mystic Rose
    Date: 2/24/2014 7:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh it is a movie by Hassan Zee, hope you locate it, it's well worth the watchxxx
  1. Date: 2/24/2014 7:17:00 AM
    This cryptic write has me spell bound my friend, I part the curtains of my mind to find you there at the heart of this poem, such tender ways you have to tell your story, I can't help but admire you, luv and hugs, from afar, but steady as they come, so do I, arrive at your thoughts, hope your smiling little one, xxx

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 2/24/2014 10:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Vie:) love and hugs back to you... Yes, i will try and catch that movie over the weekend... you take care.
  1. Date: 2/23/2014 12:41:00 PM
    Bindu you have made this romantic yet strong from a female point of view, I like it a lot...David

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 2/23/2014 10:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, David:)
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