Not a Toy

Life’s gift he received, A toy to play thought to be- Heavens were let down! © Demetrios Trifiatis 11 January 2016

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Legendary Legend

Date: 1/13/2016 3:04:00 PM

awesome poem....

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/14/2016 9:09:00 AM

Thank you for your kindness, dear L.L.!

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/12/2016 4:18:00 AM

Wasted opportunity! Powerful write there, sire. 7. Kim :-)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/12/2016 7:01:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Kim! You so gracious!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2016 5:15:00 PM

and probably heaven let HIM down too (for his own actions!!)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/11/2016 7:09:00 PM

Very much so! Thank you, dear Andrea!

Eve Roper

Date: 1/11/2016 2:41:00 PM

It is a shame to waste a gift . Well done dear friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/11/2016 7:10:00 PM

Absolutely, dear Eve! Thank you very much!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/11/2016 12:16:00 PM

- Our life is the total of the choices we've made, I guess - Well written dear friend ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/11/2016 12:34:00 PM

Yes, it is. Anne-Lise! Here, however, the point is that each one of us comes to life with a specific mission, if we do not honor our mission then we betray the one who gave us the gift of life: God! Thank you dearest for your visit and constructive comment!

Jill Spagnola

Date: 1/11/2016 7:15:00 AM

Strong, powerful message Demetrios!! ~jill

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/11/2016 7:23:00 AM

Welcome, dear Jill! Hope you find what you are looking for. Thank you for your kind visit and precious comment!