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Northern Light Angel

In twilight beneath the tapestries of stars She silently pulled on her slippers To dance upon the earth's orb Twinkling star dust with each step She whirled around the heavens Light followed in her foot steps Each step illuminated the sky The angel created a magical glow The sky became vibrant shades as she danced across the sky Her unsurpassed beauty and inner glow humbled my senses as she flowed She left quickly and left me longing for more. 2/10/13

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Betty Bolden

Date: 2/22/2013 3:37:00 AM

Wonderful just so nice.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/19/2013 10:20:00 AM

Dear Phyllis,Hope this finds You and Yours Healthy and High in the Spirit. The imagery is so clear, I can see the Angel dancing across the evening sky "She left quickly and left me longing for more" also. When I was young my grandpa took me to Canada to watch the "Northern Light Angel" dancing thru the night skys. Great Pen LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/19/2013 9:30:00 AM

Ease up with the cold weather.

Frederick Mungo

Date: 2/19/2013 8:35:00 AM

I THINK THIS IS PURE CREATIVITY GOOD WORK MAM.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2013 10:27:00 PM

and I am seeing this one again. Write MORE, Phyllis. I know you can get so inspired by your beautiful landscape you tell us of in your poetry.

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/13/2013 2:53:00 PM

nicely writen.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/11/2013 6:58:00 PM

Oh, I love this Phyllis ;} I wrote something like this, called night skies 1999,,, it's not posted, though . I really love your ;} thank you for reading Missing pieces ;} xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2013 11:36:00 PM

oh, my , one of your sweetest poems yet, Phyllis. I love how you put an angel in the sky with those lights. showing such imagination. Luv,Andrea

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/10/2013 1:56:00 PM

Phyllis your poem evokes whimsy and magical visions of surrealism. It challenges my imagination to believe. Warm Smiles Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/10/2013 12:56:00 PM

A lovely view and lovely poem Phyllis. - Have you seen the Northern Lights? - North in Norway is much northern light, but it's far from where I live, I've never seen it in real life. -Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)