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No Trace

there are questions I want to ask you but you are not here you cannot hear them and even if you could there are no answers for the night is black with no sound black with no trace of light blacker than black has ever been before God made the moon before God made the stars before God made the sun there is blackness that cannot be undone and the questions that I need to ask have no place to land and they fall next to you in dead silence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/2/2012 10:00:00 AM
a very sad one, CArrie. WELL DONE!!!
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Date: 11/29/2012 4:12:00 PM
A unique poem you have penned Carrie. love phyl soup mail
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Date: 11/27/2012 7:07:00 PM
so sad but beautifully written!
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Date: 11/27/2012 3:08:00 PM
Questions that can not be answered .... Carrie, this is a very good poem, like it. - -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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