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No Rhyme

The whole day spent With broken clouds No taste nor colour A boat drifting on For aeons and aeons Inside the moment Resides what not Red bitter warm Soft flute green But the orange has left In the boat so No radar no rhyme ______________________ 1/10/2016 Not for Contest

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Date: 10/2/2016 8:26:00 AM
- Great written enjoy reading, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/3/2016 4:46:00 AM
Thank you, Anne ...probir
Date: 10/2/2016 7:12:00 AM
Soft an delightful writing dear, Probir!
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Date: 10/2/2016 4:40:00 AM
A very mellow poem Probir. I enjoyed your poem, look forward to more of your work.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/2/2016 6:23:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/1/2016 9:07:00 AM
A very lazy, peaceful read, Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/1/2016 10:48:00 AM
That is nice ... Thank you ...

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