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NO HEART

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME, (c)

No heart is large enough to contain the pain caused by the departure of our most beloved!* (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 26 September 2016 * I know of people who died within days or even hours after their beloved departed although they were in good health. To the memory of these people I dedicate this Monoku!

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/26/2016 10:58:00 PM

She true!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/26/2016 10:59:00 PM

I meant so true.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/26/2016 4:37:00 PM

Very deep, my dear. Some die of broken hearts. I believe it to be true. Miss you. Hugs

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/26/2016 7:38:00 AM

Excellent. Gem of your wise poem. Enjoyed reading it. TFS

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/26/2016 8:38:00 AM

Thank you my friend, Ravi, for your visit and kind words!

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/26/2016 5:11:00 AM

Is it really so? Or every concerned heart does not only contain, but holds, waits, broods, cleanses with the balms of passing time, and finally converts the pain into an object of tranquil memory which can be meditated upon like the red core of your yellow hibiscus ... in your enviable roof ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/26/2016 5:19:00 AM

What a brilliant thesis my friend, Probir! All depends on the degree of love we have for the departed! When our love is true and unlimited as true love is, then no heart can initially cope with the degree of pain felt although with time we are following the eloquent path you have traced! Thank you so much for your visit and comment dear, Probir!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/26/2016 3:21:00 AM

Sir, thank you for posting this wise gem. That is who you are, WISE..........A.M.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/26/2016 4:50:00 AM

I am just a friend of wisdom who doesn't know if wisdom considers me a friend of hers, my good and magnanimous friend, Afolabi! Thank you so much!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2016 2:23:00 AM

I think we can all relate to this line Demetrios:-( hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/26/2016 4:50:00 AM

Yes, unfortunately so dear, Jan! Thank you!