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Night Dreams

The bright blue diamond eyes shone Around the heart, gold, he spun A image from the distant place Where sun and moon exist Only amongst the stars you find A species of a different kind Once thought to be alone He somehow found a new home A image from the distant place where sun and moon exist He appeared inside the dream Not what was expected so it seems. He was the vision inside my head Came to me every night in my bed A image from the distant place where sun and moon exist A place where dream unfold With many stories to be told. 24/9/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/26/2012 9:01:00 AM
Milky way to be precise, that's the dream of every godly writer, that colourful place........ Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 9/25/2012 6:46:00 AM
very visionary....I like it. How are you and your sweet grand baby?
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Date: 9/24/2012 9:58:00 PM
hey, this says free verse, but there seems to be some kind of unique pattern to it where you are switching lines in the stanzas. It's very interesting how you did that. Great effect. for the dream contest??
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Date: 9/24/2012 3:28:00 PM
What we don't dream? aye? Hope you're well and happy! Light & Love
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Date: 9/24/2012 12:37:00 PM
A dreamy poem Phyllis!Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 9/24/2012 12:00:00 PM
Should sometimes wish that good dreams could come true.- Beautiful poem Phyllis. - Have a nice afternoon. xoxo love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/24/2012 10:13:00 AM
Dear Phyllis, i love the way you describe the perfect world in a dream... always~ pd
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