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New Born Moon

New Born Moon Laying low in the cloudless evening sky, Silver lit by the rapid setting sun, Where radiant Venus shines bright nearby, A waxing crescent, the moon’s month begun. A new born moon in the darkening sky, Set where the fading day at rest will lie. 25/01/17 For the Contest 'A Rhyme In 60' by Laura Loo Checked by Howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 2/9/2017 6:01:00 PM
This one is beautiful Barry, :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 2/10/2017 12:54:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi. // Barry
Date: 2/3/2017 7:59:00 AM
Venus has been incredibly bright lately Barry. Your poem is a lovely expression of wondrous aspect of nature.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 2/3/2017 1:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, James.
Date: 2/3/2017 1:19:00 AM
Beautiful, colorful imagery about nature!!! Congrats Barry, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 2/3/2017 1:33:00 PM
Thank you very much, Teddy.
Date: 2/2/2017 7:02:00 PM
So pretty! I love the way you did this subject matter of new born moon!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 2/3/2017 1:11:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea.
Date: 2/1/2017 7:23:00 PM
Lovely imagery in your beautiful poem, Barry. Congratulations on your fine win! Sandra
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 2/3/2017 1:14:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra.
Date: 2/1/2017 4:19:00 PM
Hi Barry, congratulations on your win!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 2/2/2017 9:58:00 AM
Thank you very much, Paulette. // Barry
Date: 1/31/2017 3:06:00 PM
Great write and good luck in the contest. love phyl
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 2/1/2017 1:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Phyllis and thank you for taking the time to read my work. // Barry
Date: 1/29/2017 7:38:00 PM
A 7 for this lovely poem, Barry! Janice
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 1/30/2017 2:02:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice. // Barry
Date: 1/26/2017 8:53:00 PM
That is GREAT, Barry. Good luck in the contest.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 1/27/2017 5:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea.
Date: 1/26/2017 8:14:00 AM
This is so real so visual, Barry just love it....
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 1/26/2017 8:22:00 AM
Thank you very much, Harry. // Barry

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