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© G.V. 08-25-2013 All rights reserved
© G.V. 02-07-2013
Nesreen = wild rose

Contest: Softly sensual
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Placement: 3rd

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The luring, dancing Nymph performs her chore,
unfolds in air, resplendently and splays
datura flow in mind her moves implore,
her vision passed but wraith on thoughts, she stays.

Across her altar's sacrificial tolls,
her face, her scent, will challenge and indulge,
manipulates and in half light enthralls,
ethereal to conquer and divulge.

Instinctive is her dance, the crowd accourts,
she flows in veins, red aconite domain,
no fate will be as sweet (but one she thwarts)
as thousand lengths to feel of brunette mane.

And triumphant aggresses with applause,
(blade-splendid in her bedleh and shalwars),
unfolds her wings like desert hawk that claws,
betrayed of minds with apathy ignores.

She dances, and her finger's cymbals rings,
(incursion of her attar whiff and rye);
hence splendorous, through airy moves she stings
the victims of her charm, that wish to die.

© 08-25-2013, G.V., All rights reserved
(Iambic pentameter)

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  1. Date: 9/3/2013 12:06:00 PM
    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 10:05:00 PM
    I loved it. Many warm congrats for the win.

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 9:19:00 PM
    Hi G... ... CONGRATULATIONS on your SOFTLY and SENSUAL win...always~ xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 7:49:00 PM
    your words dance across the page gracefully...congrats on your win for this beautiful poem!

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 6:50:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 3:37:00 PM
    A round of beauty all around, enjoyed your winning poem Giorgio xxx

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 7:46:00 AM
    Fantastic piece, congratulations!

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 5:05:00 PM
    reading this beauty once again Giorgio..Its an excellent post of yours.

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 3:40:00 PM
    I especially like the last stanza..Creative work that you have penned..Thanks for the visit to my poem page and taking time to read and comment...I hope this has been a great day for you..Sara

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:32:00 PM
    Hi Gigrgio, a nice winning poem... Love ~ SKAT ~

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 11:52:00 AM
    Mesmerizing subtle passion, beauty and grace... Congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 6:44:00 AM
    - This became a winning poem, it was really deserved. - Soft and romantic, Giorgio! - CONGRATULATIONS!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 5:04:00 AM
    The movements of dancing Nymph flows in your writing creating a fine pen picture

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 4:17:00 AM
    - Thank you posted this beautiful poem, Giorgio ! - Love it !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 12:54:00 AM
    This is a very beautiful poem which I love & enjoyed reading this afternoon my dear friend, Giorgio! A winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing & your kind visit on my poems. I'm so sorry if the expression of gratitude is so late. Again, thank you so much. Have a grace-filled weekend! love lots, Leonora