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Do fools fall in love... daddy don’t you walk so fast, don’t blame it on me © Harry J Horsman 2010

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Linda Barr

Date: 9/16/2012 11:50:00 PM

It depends upon the fool. Some never learn. Lol. In answer to your question about love. No, I have never experienced that forever kind of love, but my folks have.

Bulinya Martins

Date: 9/10/2012 2:06:00 AM

you are wordsmith. With few words you mold a powerful poem. Have a good day

Karen Croft

Date: 9/7/2012 5:42:00 PM

interesting! i wanted to let you know i forgot my garage sale list on my poem so i edited it

Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/7/2012 11:17:00 AM

so much in so little words! u r talented harry! very talented

George Aul

Date: 9/7/2012 9:54:00 AM

Thought provoking poem......... George

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/7/2012 7:41:00 AM

Great opening line Harry, so much to ponder on in your three lines :) love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/6/2012 6:41:00 PM

it is also sweet fate that insisted I return to PS and continue growing all my special friendships with my favorite friends so special like u luv .. thankxxx for lovely words my dear friend..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/6/2012 6:37:00 PM

amazing piece harry luv as it relates to in depth thinking .. and songs of long ago so great too ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2012 3:58:00 PM

a senryu with much to say, Harry. I am glad to see this new post of yours today!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2012 2:09:00 PM

Hoping you continue to find the inspiration to write and share your outstanding poetry with us Harry. I enjoyed reading your poetry very much today. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 9/6/2012 1:50:00 PM

love this witty senryu, Harry

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/6/2012 10:51:00 AM

Love it Harry. - (do not blame me) - Have a nice Thursday. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/6/2012 10:48:00 AM

Sounds like you have been listening to music.Love all the comments and we could do a duet. Had me chuckling with my morning coffee. Have a nice day. love phyl

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/6/2012 10:00:00 AM

Everyone does, no chance to blame. Wonderful Senryu beautifully done. Thanks for your comment on my write. My friend, bl always with you.

Erich Goller

Date: 9/6/2012 9:47:00 AM

That's a very nice expressed Senryu, Thanks for sharing it. God bless you. Erich

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 9/6/2012 9:38:00 AM

Life calling! Nice...had to think about it for a minute. Cynthia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/6/2012 9:02:00 AM

Is this that the fool did not fall in love and is now leaving on a jet plane?..The child crying in the wake of the explosion or hurt and angry feelings?...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/6/2012 8:32:00 AM

I really enjoyed this incredible write of yours Harry! Daddy doesn't seem to like you fools falling in love does he? Why not blame it on you, ha ha, sure you had nothing to do with it! What a wonderful poem, great piece, Awesome Work!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/6/2012 6:57:00 AM

enjolyed....I can't see the connection though....what is blamed??

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/6/2012 6:56:00 AM

I think the answer is a big fat yes, great Senryu. xx