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Nature's wake

The mornings bright 
lit the once black in my eyes

The tips of mine digits 
on my hands and on my feet 
pulled me like the rubber band
in a mighty stretch,
I then

And after my wake;
nature had me reach for
the you

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  1. Date: 1/11/2012 10:09:00 AM
    darling James.. lovely as ever.. kust wanted u to know I managed to get a partner for the contest in question to u..but were my first choice.. maybe next time luv..

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 3:36:00 PM
    Nothing nicer than waking up with beautiful sunshine and even more wonderful is having someone to hug. Wishing you and Noah a very happy 2012. love phyl

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 2:44:00 PM
    What is Sir James up to, I was just asking myself. So, I decided to find one of his poems and read it a few hundred times - such is his complex mind. This is not complex, James, just great. Merry Christmas. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 9:07:00 PM
    Ah, this poem was really nice to read! Hope all is well, James! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/14/2011 10:39:00 AM
    Many people wake up groggy and need a cup of coffee before they reach out for their loved one. How wonderful that the mere touch of the sun on your eyes makes you reach for her. Beautifully written, James. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/14/2011 9:29:00 AM
    Good morning James, i love the dilation in ones sight of awaking.. and reaching for warmth all over again sounds good.. great poem,..p.d.

  1. Date: 12/14/2011 9:12:00 AM
    Like this James, alot to read into here. harry

  1. Date: 12/13/2011 4:13:00 PM
    Can't imagine who you were reaching for James but I hope she woke you up and made the day special! :)

  1. Date: 12/12/2011 9:55:00 PM
    you sounded like an adorable cat that i'd like to pet all the time James. LoL (sorry if I use cat, maybe a guy would prefer dog..?). Btw, i hope you have the chance to read my poem 'Thank you and Sorry', that one was for you dear poet. my best holiday wishes JP!

  1. Date: 12/11/2011 9:14:00 AM
    liked the way you awoke! especially the mighty stretch! good,Deb

  1. Date: 12/11/2011 6:47:00 AM
    how cute. Enjoyed your wake up poem. Happy Holidays, James! Catie :)