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Nature the Destroyer

she orchestrates storms her air - which we deplete - she turns against us feeling ungrounded - she quakes inside ancient bones. . . we feel her pain water fills her veins from oceanic wounds. . . . she bleeds tsunamis with red hot passion she is seething at her core. . . . fire will be our death Written by Andrea Dietrich For PD's NATURE THE DESTROYER *HAIKU FORM ONLY* Poetry Contest

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 11:20:00 AM

LOL, yup she would. LOL

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2012 1:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Nature The Destroyer" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 5:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in this contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2012 12:21:00 AM

I thought about what Chris said of my haiku, and I decided to take out the "and" words . I think Haiku read much better without them and I don't know why I keep acting like 5/7/5 is set in stone!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2012 9:07:00 PM

congrats Andrea on an HM for an elegant Haiku luv..

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/16/2012 7:30:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this again, Andrea. Great imagery. Congrats on your HM! Love, KIm

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2012 10:38:00 PM

ANDREA~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/14/2012 5:14:00 PM

Nature sure can be destructive and we have no chance against her. Good luck in PD'S contest. love phyl

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/14/2012 4:26:00 PM

best of luck in the contest, these are exceptional haikus' 2 and 3 are my favourites. harry

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/12/2012 8:20:00 PM

Super strong personifying here, Andrea!...I feel as tho' I can see the character so vividly...sounds like a scorned woman on a rampage....I am in second round of judging...I will EMAIL u the final round b4 I close my eyes this evening...love ya, Gwendolen

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 3/11/2012 10:53:00 PM

and when will we learn to NEVER underestimate the MOFO called Mother Earth! Just last week she reeked HAVOC on IndY, Ky, and Ohio, as well as some southern states. I always find it quite odd when people videotape twister. I mean, that would be the LAST THING my white azz would be doin during a 175 mph duel to the death! whaddabout you!?! I love the PO-eeeeeeM!

M.I.A .

Date: 3/11/2012 8:44:00 PM

this is a force to be reckoned in all! You made a thrilling image of her persona in this lovely haiku Andrea. Good luck on the contest ;)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/11/2012 6:07:00 PM

Yes, this one has truth and danger..Reads like a winner..Good luck in PD's contest..Thanks for stopping by..I was not to happy the way my work "Boundless Love" went but when I went away and rested then came back and read it again it had a better feel to it..Sara

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/11/2012 2:50:00 PM

What can we do to appease her rage. When we ignore the lesson's of this wise old sage. She's showed us in many ways. The shortening of her tolerant days. The final chapter's out of our hands. It's hard to say what truth still stands.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/11/2012 1:38:00 PM

powerful and truly "seething at the core" - an excellent poem for the contest. good luck!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/11/2012 9:17:00 AM

a burst of nature's wrath well scribed through your word scenes, andie.. whoot!.. is your element fore?. i'm earth!... a raging beauty!..:) huggs!

Daver Austin

Date: 3/11/2012 9:11:00 AM

I aint gonna fool with her - no siree. I especially can relate to the second one. These ancient bones of mine feel the quake every day. Like 'em all. LOve, daver

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/11/2012 7:26:00 AM

Nature's revolution starts to end from time to time, we are bound to bear, all are helpless. Though, it makes justice. Very deep philosophy, loved always, bl

Jack Horne

Date: 3/11/2012 6:39:00 AM

Love these powerful haiku, my friend

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/11/2012 1:27:00 AM

yes..Andrea,...the more the merrier... glad it was more than 2..lol..but, 2 r ok...pd

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/11/2012 1:05:00 AM

hi...Andrea, i logged on just for you.. lol.. now let me go check my mail.... xool entry..pd

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/11/2012 12:31:00 AM

Great description of a hypothetical natural catastrophe. I hope something like this hits Atlantic City.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/10/2012 11:20:00 PM

You have described mother earth in her angriest, most destructive moments. I have chills! An awesome write. Blessings, Rhonda

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/10/2012 8:46:00 PM

A very descriptive write, Andrea. My favorite line is "she bleeds tsunamis". Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/10/2012 8:45:00 PM

A writhing within, The winds blow ever greater, Pounding hurricane! Here's an additional Haiku for your Haiku! I know you won't actually use it, but I thought I'd help you out with another catastrophe! You described an incredible bunch of natural disasters! I love your write tons Andrea! Great Work!!