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Natty and Patty

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Natty and Patty

There once was a golfer named Natty
Who hired a young caddy called Patty
Patty loved gossip
Natty said 'Stop it!'
'Just caddy! You're driving me batty!'

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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 4:31:00 PM
    Congrats, Tim. Well done. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 9:30:00 AM
    LOL LOL Another fantastic write Tim--and thanks for entering the contest!

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 7:45:00 AM
    Loved your tongue twister Tim...congrats...Donna

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 10:56:00 AM
    Hi Tim Tim, stopping by to read your winning poem in Craig's golfing limerick. Congratulations with your fun swing ;-) Always & Forever*PD

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 11:30:00 PM
    COngrats Tim on this great win.....Well penned..... Cheers

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 8:10:00 AM
    Congrats Tim!...its a good one

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 5:52:00 AM
    ha, congratulations Tim , nice one xx

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 3:56:00 AM
    Congratulations Trent!! Glad to see you up there in the circle. Dianah

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 3:53:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, love this. Rick

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 6:31:00 PM
    Good Limerick! Congratulations on the top spot!

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 5:01:00 PM
    This was very good. J

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 3:54:00 PM
    Enjoyed this clever pen. Congrats on your win. ~A.O

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 2:06:00 PM
    great !! congrats on your win Tim

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 1:41:00 PM
    ha! this one is lots of fun. congrats!

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 10:58:00 AM
    This one was my favorite!!! Great work, Tim !!!

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 10:07:00 PM
    Great fun. Enjoyed this.

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 5:02:00 PM
    this is great. one of the best I have read in this contest!

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 12:15:00 AM
    Full of humor. Nice.

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 6:06:00 PM
    LOL...witty limerick Tim! Hugs

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 2:50:00 AM
    Tim, ha this is great, good luck and Happy Easter...David