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Mysterious

My soul is like a deep shadow you can look into my darkness with the brightest source of light in existence and try as hard as you can to figure me out yet, you cannot see all of me which leaves you to wonder. You stare into these dark eyes trying to see into my mind like a psychic attempting to read my thoughts my eyes sparkle and speak to your soul without a single word spoken yet, they do not say what is on my mind. You think that I am hiding something behind this invisible mask even a microscope would not help you to see it my enduring love is no masquerade I am longing to show you my shy heart which is the only thing hidden within me. I have a loneliness and a shyness about me that you seem to find rather intriguing you speak and I can only smile at you even Sherlock Holmes would have trouble solving me I am a mystery known only to myself and I would like to keep it that way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/30/2014 9:09:00 PM
Hi Kelly,, this is a sweet win:) Congratulations, <3 always ~SKAT~ <3
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Date: 4/26/2014 7:14:00 PM
aha, so you must really value your privacy. This is so neat to read this golden oldie by seeing it on PD's winner list. I really like your style here. IF Frank is only asking for new poems in his I Am contest, that is too bad. this would have been the perfect entry to HIS contest@
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Date: 4/26/2014 4:36:00 PM
Congratulations, Kelly!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/28/2014 2:47:00 PM
Thank you, Faye! :)
Date: 4/26/2014 8:36:00 AM
When stripped naked nothing is left to the imagination; same here, it is important that some things are kept personal...not wise to bare all :) congrats on a worthy win kelly. // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/27/2014 4:02:00 PM
I absolutely agree with you, Paul. Some things should be kept private and are not for the entire world to see. It is also more fun to keep them guessing! Thank you so much for the great comments. :)
Date: 4/26/2014 1:08:00 AM
Hello Kelly, stopping by a second and third time, this time to congratulate you awesome win:) Thank you so much for bearing out my contest. If you like, stop by my latest blog, "LOVE" Enjoy the tiny tribute to all the winning poems. Here's the link, :):):) http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=556582 ***Always & Forever*** -LINDA
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Date: 12/23/2013 10:16:00 PM
Kelly What an honest, truthful and heartfelt write. You took the reader on a journey into your soul, heart and mind. Great job Hugs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/26/2013 7:26:00 PM
Thank you once again, Robin! Hugs!
Date: 10/2/2013 12:09:00 PM
Very deeply written and expressed nice write and so true know one understands you like you do. also thank you for your comments.
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Date: 9/23/2013 11:44:00 AM
We are all very much our own enigmas. I agree with our esteemed friend, Mustapha; I love the honesty and confessional feel of the piece. Well done, dear sister! :)
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Date: 9/20/2013 3:25:00 AM
I like this one Kelly. Heartfelt honest expressions. You remind me of a certain confessional poet of old. Sent you a Soup mail.
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Date: 9/20/2013 2:12:00 AM
that last sentence is the best summary to this poem!
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Date: 9/19/2013 2:25:00 PM
- Everyone has a "hidden side" of themselves. - That's what makes it exciting to meet new friends. - One thing I know about you Kelly ..... you write proficient! - Well done! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/17/2013 6:31:00 PM
wow! Kelly, wow! I think you are the most mysterious soup poet. I like the way you carry yourself, and the way you write. Sometimes hiding behind the invisible mask keeps us mighty among our equally peers.. I'm just saying... they don't need to know whats under.. good Sherlock Holmes line :-)... always~ your newest fan...Linda
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Date: 9/17/2013 4:40:00 AM
Good to carry a little mystery in one's life..Our inner selves is a place of reverence for us and God only..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/16/2013 7:12:00 PM
I love those last intriguing lines.......keep the mystery your own, and keep them guessing !! Love it !!
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Date: 9/16/2013 6:38:00 PM
I KNOW EXACTLY WERE YOUR COMING FROM ON THAT ONE ACCEPT I BUILT A DAM EXCELLENT PIECE KELLY
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