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My Wish Is You

sometimes when i'm all alone nobody with me everybody gone i think of how it's nice to be home surrounded by all of my belongings my bed , my phone but when the phone does'nt ring i feel so all alone when i know that no one is comming and yet i hate to be alone i wish that there was somebody there someone who loved me someone who cared i wish that they'd write poetry and letters so that without a doubt i'd know my feelings were shared and that would be my wish come true and my second wish is that it were you

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Date: 3/7/2011 10:35:00 AM
No matter what, we all need time alone but mostly we need people around us to make us feel wanted and loved. Enjoyed your write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 3/2/2011 1:57:00 PM
Love this! Sometimes it is nice to be alone, sometimes it is not. When you are with the right person...it is not! JB
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Date: 2/28/2011 3:06:00 AM
Nice piece, talented write but this one lacks originality, just another poem about searching for love.
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:36:00 AM
Lovely thoughts of passionate feelings, The Situation
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Date: 2/27/2011 2:48:00 AM
could'nt have said it better myself. John H Loving III
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