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My Winter

Winter, a sad season, cold, foggy, but it makes you think. It makes you think of the past, the present, the furture. The best moment to think..... is during the winter and when you see that light out of the window. It's the sun..... a ray of hope. That brings more questions then a mind could answer.

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John Fleming

Date: 5/28/2016 9:22:00 AM

A drawing and much true realization , Margherita...Nicely expressed! My best regards. :) john

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/5/2014 1:38:00 AM

Winter is a gift, giving time for contemplation, time for thoughts to form poetry. Your last two lines make this poem great poetry for thought! Well done!

Mario De Paz

Date: 5/18/2013 7:57:00 AM

Margherita, i tuoi poemi sono molto belli, ma ho visto che non ne scrivi più da tempo. Perché? Anche in questo c'è un piccolo errore "furture" invece di "future". Puoi correggerlo rieditando la poesia. Ciao, Mario

Rev. Dr. Samuel Mack Oms Dd

Date: 3/23/2013 5:38:00 AM

Very true and a time when God steps in and helps us through it all Love it God bless keep up the good work hay check out my "I'm Going Home" Rev. Sam

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/8/2013 3:35:00 PM

Beautiful! Always, Laura

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/7/2013 5:04:00 PM

"Thinking is the best way to travel." That's a moody blues lyric. The way you write makes me think you might like them. They're my favorite band. I can see you sitting there in the window looking far off into the future. Await more to come from you. Have a wonderful season. :)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 3/7/2013 5:01:00 PM

I thank Sean for pointing you out to me... a very fine poem! It makes me hate winter less... Terry

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/7/2013 4:49:00 PM

Absolutely delightful my dear friend! Welcome to the Soup. Thanks to Sean Sanders for telling me about you! Hugs, Jack xox

Len Gasun

Date: 2/16/2013 11:56:00 PM

This is a very beautiful poem my dear Margherita! I love it so much! thank you so much for sharing. Please continue sharing your awesome write and welcome to the soup! love/hugs, Leonora

... Gigno

Date: 2/10/2013 10:03:00 AM

!!!

Lola Barron

Date: 2/4/2013 2:46:00 PM

Lovely poem. x

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/3/2013 2:47:00 PM

very nicely done ;}

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/3/2013 1:40:00 PM

Smashing xx

Holly Moore

Date: 2/2/2013 9:25:00 AM

This is a wonderful write and it does make you think...contrasting thoughts, contrasting seasons...Thanks for your comments on my "Excuses" nonet...Holly Moore

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/1/2013 5:06:00 AM

love your winter, and your wonderful advice...

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/31/2013 10:04:00 AM

Had me smiling with this poem today . I woke up to -39 with a windchill of -49 and need a ray of sunshine and a ray of hope. Well said. love phyl

Sean L Sanders

Date: 1/31/2013 6:24:00 AM

Margherita, you have inspirited me to be a better poet, your poem is passionate and caring and honest. Keep writing poet.

Margherita Russo
Date: 1/31/2013 2:29:00 PM

Thank you Sean! you have incorougend me to write poems! Thank you!

David Williams

Date: 1/31/2013 2:04:00 AM

Margherita a big welcome to the soup, this is a wonderful poem full of great images, I like the way you force the mind to jump quickly from one scene to another, well done...David

Margherita Russo
Date: 1/31/2013 2:16:00 PM

Thank you David

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/30/2013 2:53:00 PM

This is insightful, Margherita...the sun does offer a ray of hope...it refreshes you, and makes you want to go outdoors and just have fun! Thank you for sharing and welcome to Poetry Soup! Love, Annalise

Margherita Russo
Date: 1/31/2013 2:17:00 PM

Yes during a day indoors you just cant wait to go outside! :) Thankyou Annalise!

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/30/2013 11:24:00 AM

Welcome to the soup !! There is nothing better than seeing the sun on a cold winter day !! Winter blues need a little sunlight !! Enjoyed your poem !!

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/30/2013 11:01:00 AM

Glad to oblige. I liked the underlying message of cheer and hope. Keep up the work. There is a catalougue of forms here on the soup that you can use to try different ones. I think it is a fun challenge.

Sharon Smith

Date: 1/30/2013 10:10:00 AM

Very true. For some reason winter does make you stop and reflect. Maybe it's the people missing from the table at Christmas? Or perhaps its the prospect of a brand new year that some find daunting? Either way you've captured the spirit of the season very well. Keep writing!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/30/2013 10:01:00 AM

Well this is very nice write,,, I remember when I was 14 and writing poems. very well done. One of my grandmothers name was Margeret ,, keep writing ;} going to favorites .

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/30/2013 9:37:00 AM

I was surprised to learn you are 14, very mature writing for someone so young. Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/30/2013 2:17:00 AM

Good morning Margherita. - WOOOOOW, you've got a lot of readers and comments on your first poem - and that means it's a very good poem!! - You can be proud of yourself! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Margherita Russo
Date: 1/30/2013 10:29:00 AM

Hello Anne, yes I was very suprised for the many readers and comments on my first poem! I'm so happy! thanks! :)