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My Vow To You

As I take your hand in mine Offer you my heart Put my trust in the Lord above It won't get torn apart I look into your beautiful eyes And it's so clear to see Faithfully by your side Where I am meant to be As I softly kiss your lips The only thing I know I was born unto this earth To offer you my soul On this our wedding day My words are those of truth As our bodies grow old and tired Together our spirits dance with youth And when we reach the after life So full of mystery Standing proudly by your side Thats where I will be

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Wilma Neels

Date: 6/3/2010 10:50:00 AM

I really enjoy reading your poems, gives me renewed hope. ~ Rgds WN

Shahana Jackson

Date: 4/4/2009 7:09:00 PM

This is so unbelievably beautiful. I hope one day a guy feels this way about me. Love should be eternal and soul mates should last forever. But in this day and age many things grow sour I'm glad this type of love still exists. Great write.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/4/2009 7:09:00 PM

Congrats Michael on your featured poem. This is so beautiful reflecting on true love. God Bless Phyl Happy Easter

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/2/2009 2:57:00 PM

Hi Michael, congratulations on being feautred this week. Beautiful manifestation of a true love. Ernilando

Sue Mason

Date: 4/2/2009 12:46:00 PM

Beautiful writing as always, Michael. Nice to see you about again ... smile ... Congratulations on your writing being featured this week at the Soup!!

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/1/2009 7:36:00 AM

Congrats Michael on this profession of love "My Vow To You" being featured. God Bless. Vince

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/30/2009 9:47:00 PM

Wow... This is so beautiful. Your wife is truly a lucky woman to have so much love offered to her. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/30/2009 5:05:00 PM

With my daughter getting married this weekend, you can say this brought tears to my eyes, and believe it. I pray she shares a love as true and as strong as you and your wife. Congrats on your beautiful featured write. Love, Shar

Date: 3/30/2009 12:58:00 PM

Beautiful reflection on love. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Blessings to you. Karen

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 3/30/2009 10:06:00 AM

Always loved this one Michael, Congratulations on being featured this week! ~Trudy~

Brian Strand

Date: 3/29/2009 11:53:00 PM

Congrats on your feature this week Michael.Rgds Brian

Maggie Mae Mcafee

Date: 12/27/2008 12:19:00 PM

Michael, I am new on here and am just getting familiar. I love your words and the inspiration they relay to the reader. Am looking forward to reading all of them. Thank you for your greeting and comments. God Bless you and yours. Maggie Mae

James Foulk

Date: 8/12/2008 1:39:00 PM

this sounds like your wedding fows or should have been. this was a very touching warm, soul searching piece of wonderful poetyr to the fullness. thank you for reading my Love Faded Away and for your comment

Brian Strand

Date: 8/11/2008 12:19:00 AM

Inspirational writing Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments