John Loving Iii | + Follow Poet |
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My Valentine

Widows and widowers
Still have Valentine's
Locked in a place
Saved in a time
Nothing to bare
Nothing to buy
Just memories
Of a sweet bye and bye
Alone, yet with someone
Is our Valentine
That someone in our heart
Until the end of time

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Phyllis Babcock Date: 10/19/2013 6:40:00 PM Yes the memories of their loved ones stay with them forever. Nice thoughts you have penned. love phyl Login to Reply

K K Iloduba Jnr Date: 5/29/2013 6:00:00 AM `until the end of time`, there will always be a valentine.cheers! this is good.long time no yarn! Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 2/27/2013 11:27:00 AM Now this is beautiful John..tnks for your lovely comments on my poems Login to Reply

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 2/19/2013 10:08:00 AM Bittersweet... a fresh departure from the usual Valentine scenario. Very well done, my friend! Best wishes, Keith Login to Reply

Carol Eastman Date: 2/15/2013 11:30:00 AM Beautifully written! Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 2/10/2013 10:16:00 AM John; This is beautiful. It hits close to home. I'm one of those. Thanks My valentine is not forgtten. It's in my heart. Thanks for sharing this and for reading my poem. Lucilla Login to Reply

Cynthia Alvez Date: 2/8/2013 7:50:00 PM A verse of beauty and truth! Cynthia Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 2/7/2013 10:31:00 AM so sincere, lovely poem Login to Reply

Madelin Barton Date: 2/7/2013 9:29:00 AM Beautiful what you have here was nicely written my friend. Your ? about the fool in a poem you read of mine answered. No; the fool is not the fragile but they have lots in common. thank you for taking the time to read my poetry :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/6/2013 12:08:00 AM I really like this one. What a great little poem with such depth for the season! Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 2/5/2013 5:51:00 PM This is so beautiful... anyone lucky to have good memories and not angry bad ones of a relationship is lucky indeed. Your valentine is for all time and eternity. Blessings Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/5/2013 5:39:00 PM A cherished memory..Enjoyed reading thanks for the visit..Sara Login to Reply

Jl Sadberry Date: 2/5/2013 4:16:00 PM *.* Reading this wonderful heartfelt poem twice and thinking of The Prophetess Anna and all the many years that she was widowed, dear John = I am a big fan of love and not only amid the here and now, but a love that shall last beyound the ends of timeless time == This is very beautiful and thank you for your kindness as warm condols; truly === Always, Jasper *.* Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/5/2013 1:42:00 PM Dear John, Very touching poem indeed! One can understand it only in the degree he has lived it! Your writing brought tears onto my eyes! Thank you for the comment! My numerology is not Good but Harry gave me the answer! YES! No matter the name THEE is the same! Login to Reply