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My Sweet

I love you my sweet
you are sweeter than a strawberry swirl
and softer than a flump
when I am with you my heart melts like butter scotch
and my words come unstuck like toffee.

I wish there were hundreds and thousands of you 
but you're the original gobsmacker!

You're the rosy apple of my eye
and when I'm with you
I feel like
I'm on a flying saucer! 

(apologies to my american compandres as these are mostly british confectionary)

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  1. Date: 11/19/2008 9:18:00 AM
    If your American compadres never had British confectionary or Scottish jellies or Shepherd's pie they don't know what they are missing. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 11/19/2008 8:26:00 AM
    You are very talented, and this is quite beautiful. Welcome to the Site. The purpose here is to read poetry kindly. So, in future, please say nice things, or don't comment at all. I hope we can be friends. Christie