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My Superman Kite

fly high and fast, man of steel trying to escape and fly free for real, darting to and fro quickly, pulling and circling and diving I hold tight as his cape and mighty fist pointed high, finally climb to the bright noon sky---no bird or plane is this that flies---it's superman. the wind whips and snaps hard against his chest and I wish I could ride there and look down upon me like he b u t the b o l d red "s" r u l e s the s k y n o t me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/1/2020 6:35:00 AM
Good one.These are not so easy to do but you did an excellent job. A superman kite would be nice. They are fun to fly for sure. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Date: 11/29/2020 9:22:00 PM
Lovely shape and verse, dear Craig. Many Congrats on your win. ~ Elaine
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Date: 11/29/2020 6:45:00 PM
This is really cool, Craig. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 11/29/2020 11:19:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "SHAPE UP" contest, Craig :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/29/2020 7:32:00 AM
Very cleverly crafted Craig, congratulations on the well deserved win... Belle
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:23:00 AM
Clever Craig, great shape making, congratulations on your win! hugs
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Date: 5/21/2018 11:22:00 PM
Creative form with matching context. Seems like it would be fun to write.
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Date: 5/20/2017 7:48:00 PM
Love it! For me its the content in the tail that makes this poetry... the 'rules' the sky... gorgeous.
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