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My Soul's Wings

MY SOUL’S WINGS My soul, Its wings yearns to stretch For To soar high on eternity’s silver cloud But Human suffering, tied keeps her, On Reality’s unhappy ground! © Demetrios Trifiatis 14 JUNE 2013

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/14/2013 12:26:00 PM

Hi; I agree with you 100%. My Soul's wings are keeping me down too. Many blessings always...... Lucilla

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/14/2013 1:57:00 PM

Dear Lucy, you were missed! Hope all will be fine with you! God bless you my dear and keep you healthy! Thank you very much for your visit!

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 6/14/2013 11:47:00 AM

My dearest Demetrios. did you try meditation? The people who does it says they feel an immense happiness and feel free. I love to do it but my mind is most of the time race back or forward. Your soul should be in the poetry world eternally!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/14/2013 11:56:00 AM

My dearest, I have taught it in the past! When we write something sometimes we put ourselves in someone else's shoes to help! Thank you for your comment!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/14/2013 11:42:00 AM

a poetic gem that seizes a melancholic yet beautiful thought... how engaging and delightful, D... greeat work!..:)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/14/2013 11:59:00 AM

Well, my dear, life has both sides! No-one, if he loves his fellow man, can be truly happy if others suffer! Thank you for your lovely comment. I appreciate it!