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MY PRIVATE ROAM

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MY PRIVATE ROAM



She drapes herself in aquamarine veil
Along pearly crests, bouncing foams lift and rise
Where a mermaid glides like a whimsical sail,
A reflection I own with alluring sighs

Glossed heat bounces dreams of my longing days
To warm a desire entranced from shore land
As grains of dew perk gills and mollusks’ play
A vignette lifted from tales of myth’s wand

Jiggling my feet on ridge of tidal frame
This my river adorns my sweet private roam,
Yielding life’s call, an oath of secrets remains
I become a mermaid in Neptune’s home.

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  1. Date: 10/27/2012 4:35:00 AM
    This poem is so beautiful.

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 5:15:00 AM
    beautiful poem, filled with lots of imagery...glad i read your poem with my morning coffee...loved it!

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 5:07:00 AM
    'Jiggling my feet on ridge of tidal frame' I love that line, brilliant. A beautiful poem which has a calmness about it, love it.

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 3:16:00 AM
    One of your beauty glowing here in this poem. Wonderfully expressed. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 6:14:00 PM
    Very beautiful poem nette, love elizabeth

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 3:27:00 PM
    Wow nette, i believe i want to become a fisherman, after reading this beautiful poem from your pen....

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 1:03:00 PM
    Hi I entered your contest, I am nwe so can you let me know if you recieved okay and let me know if I followed your instructions okay.Thanks Also love this poem, great mood you have created, I feel the oceans call.

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 12:46:00 PM
    Nette, over and over again I admire your poem you have a lovely way of writing. Have a nice afternoon. :) oxox / / love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:27:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your poem...your use of language and image was pleasing and inventive.

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:21:00 AM
    I believe you would be a very philosophical and illustrious mermaid my friend! You would be a masterful poet of the deep, as you are here on dry land! This is a perfect write Nette, I just love this ingenious poem! What a delightful and pleasant piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:01:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your creative work this afternoon..I am glad that I chose it to read..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by my work..Your reviews are always appreciated..Sara

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 9:35:00 AM
    Another excellent poem from you!!!Love this!

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 9:33:00 AM
    Ohh...LINDA beat me......

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 9:32:00 AM
    OH SO IMPRESSIVE IS THIS SUPERB REFLECTION OF PHENOMENAL POETRY .. WINNING WISHES FOR MICHAEL'S CHALLENGE .. ALREADY #ONE NETTE LUV ..