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My October Bliss

September softly comes, then leaves; October breezes in, and with a touch of magic weaves her spell on us again, for happily at dusk we tread our secret path through trees that blaze in hues of gold and red as heaven turns cerise. And as I’m walking with my love, a chill wind starts to blow. we hasten to the entrance of a cozy bungalow. . . Our dinner’s fixed; a fire’s lit inside our hideaway. Beside a fireplace we sit at this, the close of day. As wood smoke rises to the sky, he warms me with a kiss, which lends the sweetest quality to my October bliss.

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Date: 9/30/2017 12:01:00 PM
I can feel the warmth, congratulations Andrea...
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Date: 9/29/2017 9:13:00 PM
What an October Bliss Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed reading.
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Date: 9/29/2017 6:39:00 PM
Andrea, so beautifully penned, congratulations on your win in the contest !
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Date: 9/29/2017 4:20:00 PM
Pure enchantment Andrea! What movies are made of! Congratulations on your well deserved placement my friend! : )
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Date: 9/29/2017 8:19:00 AM
This sounds so nice Andrea! Congratulations :) I like the line of the secret path through the trees too :)
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Date: 9/29/2017 5:34:00 AM
Congrats Andrea!
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Date: 9/29/2017 12:47:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win as usual with a beautiful poem.
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Date: 9/28/2017 11:41:00 PM
Exquisite rhyme and cadence as always, Andrea, and a sublime story woven with care and intelligence ... lovely imagery and emotion, and it is ALWAYS a joy and privilege to read you! Blessings and congrats on this well-deserved win, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 11/24/2015 4:10:00 AM
Fav Lines, "As wood smoke rises to the sky, he warms me with a kiss, which lends the sweetest quality to my October bliss" Bang Ka~Push, that's adorable Congs My Loving Friend
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Date: 11/23/2015 11:30:00 AM
Andrea, this is sweetly romantic and picturesque! I love it! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/21/2015 6:13:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 11/21/2015 8:10:00 AM
Yup, there is not much more romantic than an easy walk on a crisp October day.
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Date: 11/21/2015 6:50:00 AM
Aww nicely done, grats on your win.
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Date: 11/21/2015 4:21:00 AM
This is all so cozy. You wrote a lovely setting, Andrea. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/21/2015 2:26:00 AM
I love it Andrea, congrats on the win...hugs
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:23:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb poetry Andrea!
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Date: 11/20/2015 10:51:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your wonderful OCTOBER win. I'm inviting you in hopes you enjoy my blog "I am the Pen" wrapping up October and its late winners :( Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
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Date: 11/20/2015 10:39:00 PM
Congrats Andrea! :)
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Date: 3/13/2013 6:20:00 AM
Lovely...fall is my favorite time of the year, but I don't get to enjoy it anymore because fall is also HARVEST!!!AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!! 100 hour weeks with no days off for 3 months...yay.
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Date: 10/9/2011 10:29:00 PM
have a nice one, and congrats on your win..OCTOBER~ goatta love the month..p.d.
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Date: 10/10/2011 2:11:00 AM
pd, you are just SO wrong about all this.YOur perception of how I comment here is way off base. I do not go to "new poems" very often. I spend most of my time answering to those who are commenting back to ME. Anyway, I will try to explain more in a soupmail.
Date: 10/9/2011 10:23:00 PM
oo~ that's funny Andrea, hhahahhah! hope you are welll....
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Date: 10/8/2011 10:44:00 AM
this is a sweet poem on Oct. bliss. Have a lot of catching up to read. phyl
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Date: 10/6/2011 4:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 10/5/2011 9:36:00 PM
May your October remain full of the bliss of your love, your cozy home and fireside. Congrats on your win Andrea....luv Margaret
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Date: 10/5/2011 5:03:00 PM
your wins are stacking up andrea! congrats on 1st place with this autumnal poem, very colourful and romantic, I like :-)
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