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My love’s a dusky grape hid on the vine. I find his sweet bouquet in desire’s wine. My love’s an envied rose plucked tenderly. I cling to him, for I’m his honeybee. My love’s a road that winds behind green hills. I’m led to new delights. . .his secret rills. My love’s a letter penned with passion’s gust. I read his eyes and see the soul I trust. For Rick Parise's 5 ~ 8 Line Poetry / Any Theme Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/14/2013 10:29:00 AM
Andrea Such a loving and charming write I can feel the passion and care for this special person. You described your feelings so sweetly and from the heart. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Childish Behavior poem. Hugs
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Date: 2/1/2012 9:17:00 AM
This is very sweet, Andrea. Especially the last stanzas :)
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Date: 12/27/2011 11:53:00 AM
A winner congrats dear friend. A sweet write on this poem. love phyl--so behind and i am on catch up.
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Date: 12/21/2011 9:19:00 PM
Bravo!!!!Bravo!!!! Such a good write...Andrea :)
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Date: 12/20/2011 2:22:00 PM
Sweet and tender write, my friend - and I see it was a winner! Many congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 12/19/2011 3:22:00 PM
It's lovely to see life through your eyes of femininity.
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Date: 12/19/2011 12:11:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, my friend. bl
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Date: 12/19/2011 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in ^Rick's "5~8 Line Poetry" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/18/2011 3:32:00 PM
ahhh loverly!!! refreshing..I best go read funny stuff tonight!!! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 12/18/2011 8:32:00 AM
Ooo I love this one Andrea xxx
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Date: 12/17/2011 7:44:00 PM
very imaginative and varied : )
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Date: 12/17/2011 12:33:00 PM
"I'm his honeybee." Do you know Mr. Snow from Carrousel? Very tender stuff, Andrea. I just got your book through the mail - will read pronto. You are amazing, in that your writing is so consistently fine. Love, daver
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Date: 12/17/2011 7:57:00 AM
Bravo!!!! Bravo!!!! I like this Andrea :) Best, Jon
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Date: 12/17/2011 7:11:00 AM
Quite a talent...really love this one, Big
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Date: 12/16/2011 11:30:00 PM
Hi Andrea, You really excel at writing love poems. I so enjoyed reading this one. Best of luck in the contest. I 've been sooooo busy getting ready for a houseful of company.
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Date: 12/16/2011 3:27:00 PM
so, so, so,,sweet,,,you are a sweetheart,,to write this,,for you love,,,and it is brilliant.....
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Date: 12/16/2011 2:21:00 PM
Andrea ..... BEAUTIFUL poem !!! x-x-x-x-x for the Contest!Love Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/16/2011 1:31:00 PM
Andrea, I see you got the magic flow mojo working again! Really nice one my friend. I had to bust out the dictionary for "rill". Get it? For "real" :) HA! 7 up And to my faves list!
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Date: 12/16/2011 12:16:00 PM
Nice to be a bee Andrea, you can sip the nectar or sting if the need be. I like the idea! :)
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Date: 12/16/2011 11:52:00 AM
This is a gem Andrea, absolutely love it.. All the best for the contest ;) love Wilma
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Date: 12/16/2011 7:04:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Andrea. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I am going to see if I can write something for a couple contests this weekend. Hope you find the inspiration to do the same. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/16/2011 5:58:00 AM
Andrea, Here's a P.S. I have to go to work and it is the weekend so I probably won't be on line until Sunday night or very late Friday and Saturday night. After 1:00 A.M. Respectfully A Fledgling Poet Kenny
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Date: 12/16/2011 5:56:00 AM
A delightful read!!
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Date: 12/16/2011 5:51:00 AM
Andrea, This is a Great Poem. Your talent should give You a win. I look forward to see You in the winners circle. Soup mail reply Respectfully, A Fledgling Poet kenny
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Date: 12/16/2011 5:32:00 AM
Love that you're his honeybee!! Rick should love this!It's very passionate! love,Deb
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