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The eye-catching eyes of yours
rippled my heart,
your perfect character
touched me to the marrow,
and the tenderness of your skin
made my carnal body convulse with lust.

I was infatuated_
or was I in love?
About you I fantasised a lot
and even secretly masturbated
to relieve my built-up tension.

You shook the whole of my universe!

Then I beckoned,
and you gave me a nod, a yes,
and we hopped in the same bus
of conjugal relationship.

Ours was the talk of the town,
envied far and near,

And then,
out of the blue,
all of a sudden,
you wanted to go:
you demanded a divorce,
which jolted me out of my senses!

What's the problem? Gossips?
What's my offense? Infidelity?
What's my sin? Adultery?

None? Then why?

Please leave me not,
my muse!
Without you,
I'll die!

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  1. Date: 5/9/2013 9:40:00 PM
    :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 8:22:00 AM
    very strong...made remember my hellen.. :-B

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 6:20:00 PM
    H. B.,, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; If you like, please consider checking out my newest contest for fun : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems as of now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on certain poems, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA"

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 6:22:00 PM
    Your writing is very heart felt. Keep posting and welcome to the Soup. Rick