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My Love

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My Love

                                                        My Love,     
                                                 His  eyes  melting
                                           Me  with  his  gaze,  drawn  to
                                      Him  my soul,  hearts  entwined  forever.

                                                         My Life,
                                                   His  smile holds  me
                                            In  a  daze,  makes  me  dance
                                      Under  snowflakes,  heart  stops  beating.


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  1. Date: 12/24/2013 8:05:00 AM
    Gautami Such a wonderful and romantic write. Full of passion and emotion. The devotion in your heart flowed out for the reader to see and feel. Nice job

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 5:06:00 PM
    good luck and God bless

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 11:37:00 AM
    Oh, the reader can really feel the passion in this wonderful cinquain, Gautami! I was in a daze when I first met my late husband. Your poem reminded me of how I felt when we met. Excellent! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 6:06:00 PM
    Yes it is althoug in some words it is only one. Nice poem. Thanks for your kind comments. Love, Joycej

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 3:32:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest with this wonderful work that reads like winning material..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 7:34:00 AM
    It is just beautiful," I love it. " Best of luck in the contest. And thanks for your comments on my poetry~~

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 7:34:00 AM
    This is a beautifully done cinquain. You've conveyed so much emtion. Best wishes in the contest, this is a sure winner! (makes me think i should have done a love one instead!!) Em :)

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 6:04:00 AM
    I am now mesmerized Gautami bu the loveliness of this creative poetry .. breathtaking lines of deep love and being blessed at the end is the treasure ..good luck in the contest my friend.. definitely a winner .. making it a new fav...

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 6:48:00 PM
    Just wonderful, Gautami. How nice that line "under snowflakes!"

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 10:44:00 AM
    Words from the heart will not be denied, Gutami. Beautiful and very romantic! I enjoyed reading this and best wishes for a definite win in Catie's Contest! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 9:36:00 AM
    thumbs up for such an ispiring, lilting piece, guatami... winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 9:23:00 AM
    Thanks Jimmy for liking this,best wishes to you, Gautami

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 9:18:00 AM
    Thanks Dr Ram. Andrea love means the same things to us I feel.Being somewhat similar, didn't want to enter this; tried a sad theme, but my heart would come back to this.And after this another one wouldn't form,so... Love to you, Gautami

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 9:15:00 AM
    Very nice poem...good luck in the contest...Jimmy

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 9:02:00 AM
    Lovely expressions on life and love, Gautami