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My Life In a Blip

In spite of my extremely good looks (lol) Still gotta play by the books No jumping ahead in the line Each gets their turn everything's fine Not always hunky-dory though The ups the downs just take life slow There ain't no hurry it'll all get done Take time out for having a little fun When your time is up and finally over There'll be nothing but fields of clover Time for good-byes wishing you the best That completes it as I'm laid to rest

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Date: 11/25/2022 12:08:00 AM
Ignore the blips my friend. You are way too full of life to think of fields of clover ! You have years of happiness to spread, I ask you seriously... what would Poetry Soup be... Without Happy Jack To answer everyone back.... in his jovial humorous style,,, knowing he is wearing that cheeky smile!...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/25/2022 5:15:00 AM
"cheeky" smile!... (grin) Can you see it all the way from Aussieland? WOW! XOX
Date: 11/22/2022 9:52:00 AM
I like this, Jack. I see impatient people all the time, especially in doctor's waiting rooms. Although they are running behind, I'm sure they will give these people all the time they need. I learned patience in the military, and it has stood me in good stead my entire life. Besides, I can take a quick nap almost anywhere!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/22/2022 12:53:00 PM
Like you, I am a very patience man... however my wife is not! I'm forever trying to calm her down! LOL
Date: 11/22/2022 6:40:00 AM
I'll say it again, you're in contract, you cant leave just yet lol. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/22/2022 7:58:00 AM
I ain't going nowhere my good friend! My contract isn't up for another ten years or so LOL
Date: 11/22/2022 6:29:00 AM
How delightfully witty and profound writing, my dearest x Montrealer friend, Jack! We know each other for over a decade now. Please, stick around for a few more decades. The soup will be with no...taste without you! Blessings!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/22/2022 7:55:00 AM
The soup will still have two Montreals to content with! LOL How's your day moving along... well I hope! Cheers!

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