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My Last Letter

My last letter Came to me breathless and tired, His yellow eyes I could well notice, His dad too had such eyes I enquired, And God ! another brother having similar, My reference letters helped fasten diagnosis, But oh the agony of disease itself, The mother, the siblings losing cheer, When came to know it wasn't curable, Well he was a proven thalasemia ! Three of a poor family suffered, My hands trembled and eyes teared, Blood transfusion to five year old every other month, My heart ached and prayers had failed, Words in the letters were weeping for justice, A costly affair to life of a poor innocent sick, Why God? For what wrong of his did he suffer? She wasn't coming last three months, Apprehensive I went sleepless, One day to find the mother bitterly cry, Little had I known it was my last letter ! Written September 13th, 2014 For contest 'Maybe my last letter' by Elly Wouterse

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Date: 9/14/2014 8:51:00 PM
Such a sad write but one that serves to let others know about such things. I've always thought it must be hard on doctors too when dealing with such tragic illness and death. Your fine write confirmed that. God bless you and all that you doing in caring for the sick.
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Date: 9/14/2014 7:20:00 AM
A horrific story to say the least that is very well written and excellently expressed. Humans do what they can. God answers to no one , HE doesn't have to! We are here to serve and that what you did Dr. Upma and society should recognize that. God help you and bless the work you are doing! Good luck with the contest!
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Date: 9/13/2014 9:20:00 PM
So very sad. It must be so hard at times for Doctors. I hope you get the support you need.
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Date: 9/13/2014 4:02:00 PM
you move me with this wrenching and beautiful work dr. upma... how deep this one is.. huggs
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Date: 9/13/2014 11:44:00 AM
Very touching and sad write, good luck in the contest, Dr. Upma. Are you a Dr. in medicines?
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/13/2014 11:48:00 AM
Yes Dr Ram ! I m a medical doctor! Thnx for ur kind visit !

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