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my heart weeps

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my heart weeps

my heart weeps while falling foliage lies breathless --- autumn's blanket. 

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  1. Date: 3/13/2014 2:54:00 AM
    a sad touch my BFF...SKAT

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 3:35:00 PM
    wonderful winner, congrats to you... from Harry

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 1:33:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Well done. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 12:21:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in Debbie's "Singled Out" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 8:40:00 PM
    lovely poem Linda. warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 9:29:00 AM
    Hi Sweet Linda my bff,,, , congratulations with your wonderful win in Debbie's "Singled Out" awesome contest. Hope you make an enjoyable stop on my birthday blog... Enjoy your day, I sure am...always~ PD

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 8:46:00 AM
    yes, the blanket did it, sweets.. lovely metaphors!.. congrats on your delightful win!... hello to the doggies and grandbabay!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 7:50:00 AM
    A beautiful blanket - congratulations on your win. Always a pleasure to read your poems.

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 5:10:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win, Linda. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 10:51:00 PM
    LInda, this was one of my favorites as well. AMazing, sweetie. Big congrats.

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  1. Date: 10/6/2012 4:57:00 PM
    congrats on your win Linda...splendid

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 4:55:00 PM
    Congratulations Linda for your super win in this contest...Kudos to you dear....

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 2:19:00 PM
    Glad you listed this as Epigram! It's kind of a haiku ish/ senryu hybrid if you wanted to improve it as one of those you might add a different line 3 since you already have SHOWN [very well indeed] it is fall no need to now [tell] us in line 3 XXXOOO Congrad's on your win..please try the new contest for verses which can be done in 2 lines ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 2:02:00 PM
    Very nice... Congrats on your win... Terry

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 1:45:00 PM
    this is fantastic , Linda. I just love it!!

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 5:15:00 PM
    very beautifully written wishes for the,Deb

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 4:49:00 PM
    Leaves that are falling and lying at the same time? Fallen would be better! This reminds me of the wise sayings from the Daoist and Confucian sages. It is a thought-provoking, philosophical rejoinder. Enjoyed your poem!

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 4:42:00 PM
    A sad aspect to a very beautiful scene my friend! I really enjoyed the ending, the explains a lot for the scene! I love the delightful and reflective poem! What an awesome and wondrous piece, Great Work!!