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when your young and made for fun when you speek of girls who can be won and when your instinct has turned from lust to the more serious question of who can you trust when it's time to find a mate someone who'll live long after the date when something in your heart has changed running around just is'nt the same when lonliness becomes a bitter thing because of friends one by one, marrying then you think to yourself is she the one or is there someone else

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Date: 7/14/2010 6:34:00 AM
You made me smile with your sinciere verse..Is she the one..or there is someone else?I guess when the one knocks on our heart,when we can't get the One out of our mind,when we dedicate our verse,our love for the one,then he she is the one..Go and get her:)..Sweet poem..CELENE
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:56:00 PM
whenever that question comes to mind, there is always a greater love that may be lurking in the heart. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/9/2010 5:58:00 PM
John only you will know when the time is right and if she is the one. Look into your heart. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/6/2010 2:21:00 AM
Dear John, we do reach a point when the loneliness seems unbearable, especially when our friends are happily married. Perhaps "April" is the one? I hope so, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/5/2010 5:57:00 PM
great job for the contest! enjoyed!
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Date: 7/5/2010 8:13:00 AM
Into my Favorites it does go, John. God Bless, Cile
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Date: 7/5/2010 8:11:00 AM
John, I thought I was your girl.I must admit that was BACK WHEN WE WERE YOUNG. And as your poem goes..Love this poem John. Thank you for the nice words for my poem GOD BLESS AMERICA.It has been a while.I am in a new territory (WY), still fat, crazy and a little (just a little) older.So good to hear from you.I am trying to do more on soup.I have to leave in a few minutes to read at a nursing home.It is a holiday but most of them won't even know where they are.God Bless you and yours, John. Cile
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Date: 7/5/2010 7:25:00 AM
Great write that should be in the winners' circle.. Enjoyed your expounding on excellent ideas...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I apprecitate you taking your time to do that..Sara
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Date: 7/5/2010 5:45:00 AM
great write my friend... well said... Michael
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