Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

MY FIRST LOVE (My First Poem)

John Boak Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled MY FIRST LOVE (My First Poem) which was written by poet John Boak. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by John Boak

Best John Boak Poems

+ Fav Poet

MY FIRST LOVE (My First Poem)

There sits my love at the back of the room 
Like a lovely rose that is in perfect bloom 

Her lovely brown eyes fills up my soul 
She is the only one who can make me whole 

Every now and then I steal a glance 
Her wondrous beauty just puts me in a trance 

And though she only wants to be my friend 
I know I will love her 'til the end 

She is the only one that my heart beats for 
The one I will love forevermore

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 8/10/2008 3:52:00 PM
    Hi John I love this nice romantic write, maybe in time the love that you feel for her, will win her over, don't give up hope, great write, take care D-nyce

  1. Date: 8/7/2008 10:45:00 PM
    Beautiful romantic poem John. So passionate. Good Job. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 8/6/2008 12:28:00 PM
    oh that first love. and it was worse when all they wanted to be is our friend. but other loves came and went, but that firs love will stay with our heart and memory for ever. this was a touching piece. thank you for reading my Bird by the lake and for your comment

  1. Date: 8/6/2008 12:01:00 PM
    John - What a beautiful poem of love that is point blank to the subject encasing the readers heart - Wonderful poetry in my favorite form - great job John

  1. Date: 8/6/2008 9:37:00 AM
    I love this one, John. No fuzzy edges, just a statement from your great heart, and beautiful soul. The rhyme is fluid, and the love flows with your words. You make me smile (a glowing smile). You are strong and courageous...your passion follows suit. A well loved man by many, your words evoke how countless might feel about their 'first love'. I wish you great happiness, John! God bless you and this 'lovely rose'. Love you, Mikki

  1. Date: 8/6/2008 6:37:00 AM
    Hi John. This is so beautiful in its simplicity. Can feel the real chemistry of love here. Can't help but wonder, was she your forevermore love? A joy to read. Love, Shar