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My First Haiku

I sometimes wonder, What life is really about? Then it dawns on me.

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Richard Palmer

Date: 4/4/2014 1:18:00 PM

yeah,,,wonderful write,,,you nailed it

Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/8/2016 1:54:00 PM

Apologies for such a late reply, I don't know how I missed your response. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.

Skat A

Date: 11/20/2013 4:29:00 PM

Lovely how life appears after wondering and dwelling on it for so long. Great first haiku...... SKAT

Seosamh De Burca
Date: 11/21/2013 6:36:00 PM

Hi thanks for the encouragement in my attempt at Haiku. Thank you for writing a nice comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/11/2013 1:59:00 PM

- Nice "first" Haiku, Seosamh ! - Well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Seosamh De Burca
Date: 7/12/2013 4:13:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comment.

John Posey

Date: 5/22/2013 1:33:00 PM

See! Now that wasn't so difficult, was it?... Great first effort. You're gettin' the hang of it.... Well done.... Jake

Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/22/2013 1:40:00 PM

Hi and thanks for the encouragement.

Judy Konos

Date: 5/20/2013 7:33:00 PM

Part of life is about great poetry like this one...thanks

Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/21/2013 7:01:00 PM

Thank you for reading and your very kind words.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/13/2013 2:02:00 PM

We all wonder! When we understand it is somehow a little bit late, unless... Beautiful and deep!

Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/13/2013 5:56:00 PM

Thank you again Demetrios for taking the time to read my poems, I enjoy and admire your poems so much.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2013 9:31:00 PM

I like your first haiku, Seosamh~ i like the way life is ready to wake you up every day... well at least that is the image i pick up in your haiku... enjoyed~ Linda

Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/6/2013 1:23:00 PM

Hi Linda and thank you for nice comment. I look forward to try and improve on this style.

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 5/1/2013 8:58:00 PM

haiku has a way of grabbing you....you will write more, i am certain... great last line!

Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/6/2013 1:21:00 PM

Hi, thanks for reading and comment. I know I have a lot to improve on this style but looking forward to the challenge.