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My Face

My words are the same But would you read more of me If you saw my face? Eileen Manassian Ghali *Inspired by Caleb Smith's Poem, "Stories of Beijing I"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/6/2013 6:36:00 AM
Howdy, Howdy, Eileen. Feels good to inspire something in someone else...peek a' boo...the painted hunter sees you!...do you see me?..ha
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2013 4:03:00 AM
YES! Now I see you...though knowing you are a hunter scares me! ;) I will hide.
Date: 5/4/2013 7:24:00 PM
I love what I see in your smile....!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2013 4:02:00 AM
Oh...how sweet! Love your smile too, Carrie!
Date: 5/3/2013 2:44:00 PM
Eileen enter the Love Letter Contest. You are a natural...and there is only one remaining spot..hurry
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/3/2013 2:45:00 PM
Judy...I already did! :) Check out my poem My Love Letter to Him.
Date: 5/3/2013 12:07:00 PM
For me looks never have and never will take precedence over a poet's writing. I comment to a good number of poets who don't bother to post a pic. That said, your welcoming smile is a sure winner, Eileen. :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/3/2013 12:44:00 PM
WOW Delysia! You are so sweet and kind! I love reading your posts. Thanks for the bit of sunshine in my life. Hugs!
Date: 5/3/2013 7:38:00 AM
Certainly, YES! I hope it is what we see! Ha-ha! Your poems are as lovely...!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/3/2013 11:00:00 AM
My dear poet, you are always so gracious with your remarks. I am honored. :)
Date: 5/3/2013 12:21:00 AM
There's lot of famous writers that affected many, that weren't exactly the "most appealing to the eye"... just look at Edgar Allan Poe. This reminds me of a restaurant I used to go that got shut down. The few that ate there LOVED it, but no one was very enthusiastic about trying something new because the outside of the building looked very drab. You gotta give people a chance. Some have beautiful bodies but are ugly inside. Some have so much to say, but no one listens because of their looks...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/3/2013 1:39:00 AM
I heartily agree, Timothy. Yes, tis true tis true, but beauty is an asset. We can't deny that, but your post rings true in many ways. Thanks fo reading and posting! :)
Date: 5/2/2013 11:04:00 PM
I think that about people all the time, if I could see their face , I could tell if they were lieing;} Concrete Angel, I was thinking of Shriners children hospital ;}
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/3/2013 1:38:00 AM
Yes...there is so much that the face reveals...even the choice of Avatar reveals much about a person. Thanks for the explanation about Concrete Angel. :)
Date: 5/2/2013 4:06:00 PM
interesting thought. i do like seeing other poets' faces, but it won't affect whether or not i read their work...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/2/2013 4:08:00 PM
Hi Ilene! I'm glad to hear that. Not everyone is like you! I'm very visual and though titles and subject lines do draw me....faces do as well! :) Hey...you have a pretty smile! Hugs!
Date: 5/2/2013 3:00:00 PM
Do you mean your work on here or you as a person, Clarify. I hate these three line puzzlers lol
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Richard D Seal
Date: 5/2/2013 5:20:00 PM
Peronally I would read her work, if I liked it I would read more, her looks would not influence me at all. Never judge a book by its cover, point here really, is she a good writer
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/2/2013 3:05:00 PM
I KNOW...silly typo!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/2/2013 3:04:00 PM
Oh....I thought it was clear. I meant here on the SOUP! Avatars are always very appealing. I wrote a poem on that, remember? I just introduced my student who has entered the site and she is knock out beautiful. She won our unis beauty pageant. I put her pic up on my album on FB cause I now more people will read her if they see her face. Sad...but true!

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