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My Dream Vacation

Sand sparkles like diamonds under my feet. Sun smiles in blue sky. I watch seagulls fly while sitting with ease at my beach retreat. I don’t need palaces like at Versailles, museums or other attractions to see. I relish instead dusk’s peace in cerise. My dream vacation includes family. Food, laughter and good times seem never to cease. The sun’s warming rays that darken our skin as we jump the waves that roll toward the shore bring special magic to light us within, and life is a dream with joy at its core. I feel again like I am eleven. Maybe, just maybe, I am in heaven! March 22, 2022 For the "My Dream Vacation Poetry Contest" of L MILTON HANKINS

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Date: 4/3/2022 3:59:00 AM
Such a wonderful dream vacation my dear friend Andrea. After reading your poem, it makes me dream the same thing as I miss my family so much. I pray that your dream vacation will come true. Thank you so much for sharing. Congratulations on your shining win and this superb write! Blessings! Hugs.
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Date: 4/2/2022 3:24:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your dream vacation, making me long for vacation with family... God bless you.
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Date: 4/1/2022 10:12:00 PM
Congratulations Andie..Your dream vacation makes me dream...All the best.
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Date: 4/1/2022 6:40:00 PM
Well-said, Andrea. It is my kind of vacation, relaxing with family and friends. Well-deserved honor in Milton's contest.
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Date: 4/1/2022 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations on win! Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 4/1/2022 9:28:00 AM
"I feel again like I am eleven. Maybe, just maybe, I am in heaven!" - You give beautiful punches. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/1/2022 7:50:00 AM
Nicely done, Andrea. I enjoyed your poem a lot. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/31/2022 5:43:00 PM
Hello Andrea, This stunning poem is perfection itself. A cascade of delightful details. With regard to your reflections on “Crier” I’m honoured by your generosity. I sometimes confuse Haikus and Kimos too. Best wishes Howard
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Date: 3/26/2022 6:21:00 AM
"Sand sparkles like diamonds under my feet" - the first line itself takes me to a vacation in my dream, Dear Andrea. There is nothing more delightful than being in a favourite place with family ! Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 3/24/2022 5:24:00 PM
It sounds like you just want to have a little fun. I enjoyed your poem, Andrea. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 3/24/2022 10:25:00 AM
I loved the imagery your poem created Ria... I know how much you love your family... Same with me... A Fav... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 3/23/2022 9:30:00 PM
Your imagery sparkles like precious jewels. Loved this! A fave!
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Date: 3/23/2022 7:39:00 PM
This is lovely Andrea, i followed every word, wishing oh so wishing.
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Date: 3/23/2022 1:55:00 PM
sounds lovely.. your really gave the reader an image of your favourite place..
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Date: 3/23/2022 12:46:00 PM
Poetry that uplifts is very special. This is beautiful. I think I need a "Dream Vacation".
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Date: 3/23/2022 11:58:00 AM
Well said! Nothing compares with feeling Joy! Aloha!
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Date: 3/23/2022 11:48:00 AM
wow, andrea! this is a masterpiece! i think you've just won the contest...
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Date: 3/23/2022 12:44:00 PM
that was sure nice of you. I wish I could think of more images for it!
Date: 3/23/2022 10:31:00 AM
So beautiful! You must have a lovely family!
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Date: 3/23/2022 7:54:00 AM
"I relish instead dusk’s peace in cerise", Lovely write Andrea, best wishes
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Date: 3/23/2022 5:27:00 AM
Your poem exudes the joy of being there with your family. Enjoyed reading your descriptions, Andrea.
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Date: 3/23/2022 3:55:00 AM
Peaceful and content, where one is in life, is the wealth of the universe. Lovely writing!
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