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My Bleeding Heart

Maybe blood will get on you, from my heart My still bleeding heart beats for only you I find pain so immense, you tear me apart You have made me so lost by what you do You destroyed my tenderness, my essence Nothing remains in me but true heartache I bleed because I’m alive, but with less I thought at one time you’re my perfect mate Things took a turn for worse one cloudy day Large injury I acquired by your stab In the dark you came wielding what you may To hurt my heart, a wound without a scab I’m glad you got some of my burning blood Now listen, for my heart’s about to thud
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/28/2013 4:06:00 PM
Very expressive and emotive work..I hope that you don't have a bleeding heart..I hope that it is well and filled with love that is returned..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/28/2013 2:59:00 PM
wonderful write, my friend - fictional, I hope
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Date: 2/28/2013 9:54:00 AM
You've expressed well the hurts through this stellar write of yours my dear friend and one of my favorite poets! Sometimes, hurts makes us stronger and I believe, it also sometimes gives us a way for the better or even the best thing in life for us to come. Two thumbs up for this great write my dear friend Russell! Thank you so much for sharing. Have a great day! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/28/2013 9:34:00 AM
Dear Russell, each endings is the dawn of a new beginning! In reality you are the winner for you have loved! She lost for she didn't love back! If just a poem, it is wonderful and truthfull and touches every heart that has loved!
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Date: 2/28/2013 8:57:00 AM
Such deep pain expressed........let us hope it is all pure poetry, and not based on truth. Nicely done!!
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Date: 2/28/2013 7:50:00 AM
oh Russell this is so sad, I only hope someone can make it thump again in rhythm with theirs xx
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