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  About a close friend who I know will always be there for me, even though we don't see eye to eye on many issues! We resolved our differences the following morning, and now are even closer!

 

I have a friend that I thought understood, How do I tell him that he never could? We have shared our ups and we've shared our downs, Upon this earth, we have shared our own frowns, We share in each other what we both like, I thought we both had the same given sight, But life in its mysteries is to blame, For we are one but we are not the same, Like the earth and sky, we both yearn to fly, So please don't tell me that this is goodbye, Throughout my life, I have made you my friend, Is it time now my beloved to end? If only we could share one thing in kind, For our friendship now is so hard to find.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/24/2017 1:35:00 PM
Glaze, gloss, and hybrid veneer. Still you and your friend will recognize and acknowledge the beauty beyond chipped paint. A beautiful write honouring friendship. I guess Martians aren't such a bad lot.:) Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 1/28/2017 5:17:00 AM
A great write on friendship, White Wolf, it's always wonderful to share our thoughts with true friends, who will understand us, even though they might disagree:)
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Date: 1/28/2017 5:33:00 AM
Yes, we all have our own opinions and philosophies, and it is great to debate them with others! Thanks, Jo /|\
Date: 1/27/2017 11:29:00 PM
A frank, honest poem. Yes, friendships can die. We change, others change, nothing stays the same, people drift apart. Your poem handles this topic in a sensitive, insightful manner. John
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Date: 1/27/2017 11:32:00 PM
Thank you, John /|\
Date: 1/25/2017 5:46:00 AM
I Loved this piece! well done. Have to say a modern sonnet sounds so much better!
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Date: 1/25/2017 5:49:00 AM
That's just because they are easier, in my opinion anyway! Thanks, James /|\
Date: 1/24/2017 4:55:00 PM
A very moving, touching poem, WW. A true friend delivers the hard truth. It is done out of love, not to hurt their friend. An exceptional poem really. Very honest and forthright. A 7+, my Aussie friend.
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Date: 1/24/2017 5:51:00 PM
You are too kind, and also right in what you say, I appreciate it RW /|\
Date: 1/24/2017 3:03:00 PM
This person sounds like the best sort of friend to have - you can agree to disagree yet still have a close bond - lovely poem White Wolf:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/24/2017 3:24:00 PM
He really is, I couldn't ask for a better mate in life! And he puts up with me so that shows you how tolerant he is! Ha. Thanks, Jan, for saying hello from all the way from the Isle of Man! /|\
Date: 1/24/2017 11:27:00 AM
I really enjoyed this truthful pen about friendship. A true friend will allow you to be yourself. That alone is a "real" friendship in my opinion. A without doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis PS, great sonette by the way.
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Date: 1/24/2017 11:35:00 AM
They can also put you back in your spot where you belong! Haha. Thanks, Alexis, for your time and comment! /|\
Date: 1/24/2017 8:30:00 AM
A great sentiment and conclusion. Wonderful write!
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Date: 1/24/2017 9:01:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment, Budgie /|\
Date: 1/24/2017 5:57:00 AM
A wonderful poem of friendship and the trails and tribulations that come with it. To disagree is normal, to understand regardless is friendship. Nicely done my friend.
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Date: 1/24/2017 6:09:00 AM
Thank you, Chris, I have been away for a few days and am looking forward to reading more of your work, /|\
Date: 1/24/2017 5:55:00 AM
What a glorious tribute to the understanding of friendship my friend, White Wolf! May you stay forever friends with the person your heart feels so close with! A seven!
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Date: 1/24/2017 6:07:00 AM
There is a saying I discovered once: I am not my brother's keeper, I am my brother! I think that says it all! Thank you kindly, Golden Tongue /|\
Date: 1/24/2017 4:27:00 AM
This is a gorgeous poem... true friendships endure anything... i hope it works out for you guys - hugs... :)
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Date: 1/24/2017 4:36:00 AM
Thank you, Claudia! After what we have been through together nothing could ever separate us as friends! /|\
Date: 1/24/2017 12:15:00 AM
It is so painful when you lose a friend, grow apart, get into a fight, or whatnot... You wrote a wonderful poem about this. I hope it will work out in the end.
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Date: 1/24/2017 12:47:00 AM
I can't expect him to understand bipolar mannerisms. But we are old friends and always will be!

Book: Shattered Sighs