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My Alyssum

Through beads of hope I gaze elegant strong and brave with greens and diamond blues a mast off her petals pearlescent dew drops lie fragrantly guiding a watchful eye Honeybee yellow stings of fate absorbing every ray of baby's breath harmoniously humming in a wholesome milieu shifting boundaries cast away drear

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Date: 11/30/2016 9:44:00 AM
What an asylum it is! As a gardener I would love one my friend, Tim! A seven!
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Date: 11/29/2016 5:54:00 PM
I love how there seems to be a vibrant shift in color from one stanza to the next.. amazing write. Love, Juli-Michelle
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/30/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thanks Juli
Date: 11/29/2016 5:45:00 PM
Jan must love this! :)
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Date: 11/29/2016 5:35:00 PM
Beautiful, for some reason the photo isn't showing up here!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/29/2016 5:46:00 PM
I just checked my phone and I couldn't see it.
Date: 11/29/2016 5:11:00 PM
Lovely Tim. I do love my flowers . Nicely done with excellent imagery. God Bless and a seven from me. Thanks so much for the kind words on my "In My Rose Garden". JB
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Date: 11/29/2016 5:45:00 PM
Thanks Judy
Date: 11/29/2016 2:31:00 PM
just like the scent and bloom of a woman... lovely write, tim.. huggs
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/29/2016 2:48:00 PM
Thanks so much nette
Date: 11/29/2016 2:27:00 PM
This sounds like a description of a beautiful garden or a bouquet of flowers... very lovely description, Tim ~~
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/29/2016 2:48:00 PM
Thanks Becca...I put the painting up that I was inspired from
Date: 11/29/2016 2:19:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful my friend. This has such a soft delicate feel to it. I really enjoyed this today.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/29/2016 2:24:00 PM
Thanks so much Chris
Date: 11/29/2016 2:13:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Tim...Indeed .
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/29/2016 2:23:00 PM
Thanks Charma...it is another poem I wrote looking at my new painting...i'll try to upload a picture
Date: 11/29/2016 2:00:00 PM
Simply and absolutely beautiful, Tim. Literally gave me goosebumps. Cheers, Doug.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/29/2016 2:21:00 PM
Thanks so much Doug
Date: 11/29/2016 1:59:00 PM
Tim this is truly beautiful description of this delicate flower. Its also called ' sweet alison':-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/29/2016 2:19:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I didn't know that.
Date: 11/29/2016 1:14:00 PM
Very nice Tim! I like it. :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/29/2016 2:21:00 PM
Thanks Heidi

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