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Thousands of breaths I withdrew from my life’s account today; balance unknown! © Demetrios Trifiatis 06 February 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2016 7:28:00 PM

wow, I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/7/2016 2:31:00 AM

I lovE, loVE, LOVE, your comment! Thank you dearest Andrea!

Eve Roper

Date: 2/6/2016 5:30:00 PM

This I understand :) Hugs Eve

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/7/2016 2:29:00 AM

Happy you do, dear Eve! Thank you!

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/6/2016 2:49:00 PM

God keeps everybody's account, He knows only how much is left to breathe. Beautiful monoku. Insightful. (7). Loved always,bl

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/7/2016 2:28:00 AM

GOD IS WISE my friend, BL! Thank you so much!

Gergana Videnova

Date: 2/6/2016 7:46:00 AM

Amazing ....I would say .... the best account ever...love it xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/6/2016 7:51:00 AM

Welcome my new friend, I am delighted with your visit and heartfelt comment! Hope you will stay with us forever and share your lovely poetry with us. Thank you dear Gergana for your gracious comment!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/6/2016 7:00:00 AM

Another gem.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/6/2016 7:10:00 AM

You so kind! Thank you my friend, Scott!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/6/2016 6:34:00 AM

- Thoughts on the paper, which is to think of dear friend - Enjoy each day as it comes ..... no one has guarantees - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/6/2016 7:12:00 AM

No guarantees asked, my dear Anne-Lise! Not from me anyway. I just follow HIS lead! Thank you so much for your visit and lovely comment!

Elaine George

Date: 2/6/2016 6:14:00 AM

BRILLIANT Monoku, dear Demetrois

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/6/2016 7:13:00 AM

Happy you like it, dear Elaine! Thank you very much!

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/6/2016 3:25:00 AM

I love this. I love looking at life through your wise eyes. May you live long, sire.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/6/2016 4:34:00 AM

Always a pleasure to see your comments, dear Kim! I do appreciate your visits. God bless you! Thank you so much!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 3:13:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, WOW, that's a good and clever monoku. Hope the balance left is more than you imagined. Life is Long... linda

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/6/2016 4:33:00 AM

What a delightful surprise! Yes, dear PD, life may be long to make us unhappy but certainly too short to make us happy! Now, about our balance, only God knows and this is better for everyone. To live long, dear Linda, it doesn't worth while unless we stay healthy: Physically, mentally and morally! Thank you so much for taking the time to visit and comment in such a lovely way!

Lydia Chitra Jacob

Date: 2/6/2016 2:56:00 AM

Truth written nicely

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/6/2016 4:29:00 AM

Welcome my new friend! Welcome to our poetic family where you will find a lot of good people you could exchange ideas and comments! Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment!