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My Valantine

if you knew how much i loved you if you knew how much i cared only if you knew the melody i hear each time i stare if you knew the rainbows that you make while your around and conceived the glitter of diamonds while i looked into your eye's the glowing of perils and ivory every time you smile the picture of the glory your hair apon a crown to me a ficticios story of how a princess loved a clown something that you give me just by being around

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/13/2012 8:52:00 PM
How come all the romantic men are out there and I get stuck with men that think of their stomachs. Do you mind if I take this one personally? Too sweet to not have it whispered in my ear! Luv, Lizzie P S So you think I should repost? Nice comment and thanks!
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Date: 3/2/2011 8:40:00 AM
A LIL' Late, thanking you for your kind comment on Lonesome road. Just wanted to wish you the best of the best, life ain't perfect is it? smile though, what a nice, loving poem this is for your love. It touched me. :) Cindy aka Lucinda
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Date: 2/14/2011 11:00:00 PM
S*M*I*L*E ~ "H*A*P*P*Y V*A*L*E*N*T*I*N*E*S D*A*Y M*Y D*E*A*R,,,B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L```S*I*T*U*A*T*I*O*N A*M*I*D”V*E*R*Y L*O*V*E*L*Y¤¤¤'L*O*V*E,,,J*O*H*N!!!:))) ~
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Date: 2/12/2011 10:44:00 PM
Dear Situation, Superb Tribute to YOUR Heart's Valentine YOU must LOVE her very Much Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my POEM " My Valentine Candy Sweet " A very brotherly Defensive Statement for the " SweetHeart of the Soup "Did YOU read Her comment?" YOUR Liege Always...HG
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Date: 2/11/2011 7:18:00 AM
A wonderful tribute to your lady love. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 1/29/2011 5:31:00 PM
such a sweet tribute for your lady. Love the line about the melody you hear just staring at her. I just saw the movie blue Valentine, about a marriage going south. the beginning of their courtship was romantic like this poem. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/27/2011 5:32:00 PM
wonderfully writen. john h loving iii
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Date: 1/27/2011 5:27:00 PM
This is a lovely poem comparing your lover to everything valuable.
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Date: 1/27/2011 12:44:00 PM
Nice thoughts well expressed on the valentine , The situation
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