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My Wish

I wish I could be a star, So that I could see the world from far, And enjoy shining bright, To show way to traveler of night. I wish I could be a flower, Which grows in natural shower, And spread its pleasant smell all over, Which gives soul an internal power. I wish I could be a bird, So that I could fly in air away from dirt, Who could go far from place to place, And could give people message of success pace . I wish I could be a cloud, So I could explain the message of peace aloud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 8:32:00 AM
Asia - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/29/2008 7:57:00 PM
Aisa - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/18/2008 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:09:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 8/12/2008 6:36:00 PM
Congratulations on a lovely write being featured this week ! Laura
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Date: 8/11/2008 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations Asia on your beautiful poem being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/11/2008 5:28:00 AM
What a peaceful poem - congrats on being featured and God bless
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Date: 8/11/2008 4:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Asia . Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2008 5:32:00 PM
Congratulations Asia on this sweet poem "My Wish" being featured. Vince
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